Yes you can.
Live your dream
2006-09-11 14:33:40
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answer #1
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answered by Judas Rabbi 7
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One of the most difficult things to do is to show your work to others, so I commend you! You have the desire to be a poet and you have some raw material to work with. If you are really interested in improving, I suggest reading as much poetry as you can, take an online course, and sign up for a writers workshop. Meanwhile, keep working on your poetry (it's something you obviously enjoy) and don't ever become afraid of asking for feedback.
2006-09-11 14:50:03
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answered by lauralovesbluesnjazz 1
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yah... just have people read it more get their opinions on how to make it better ans make changes to make it incredible. I'm a poet myself and Ill let people criticize and say what they want because its all just a way to learn from mistakes and make it awesome the next time i would re write it
2006-09-11 14:35:16
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answer #3
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answered by Scarlet5 2
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You may make it as a rapper, but not a poet. "The inertia of perpetual"? Do you even know what these words mean?
2006-09-11 14:32:33
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answered by Anonymous
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NO! Your poem sounds like vague science fiction...it is not touching, nor romantic. It does not move the audience...in fact, I found it tedious!
If you cannot entertain or move others with your words, find a new hobby that you can support yourself with.
2006-09-11 14:32:59
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answered by : ) 4
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Yes you will. Just keep writing and believe in yourself. That poem was great.
2006-09-11 14:34:46
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answered by Nico 7
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Follow your dreams, but have something to fall back on. It's more who you know that what you know. Cover all your bases. Good luck.
2006-09-11 14:35:18
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answered by Anonymous
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Very talented! Congrats on your gift! Write on!
2006-09-11 14:33:29
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answer #8
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answered by sweetie 3
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OH---Poet!!! I thought it was pet!!!! Well, I can't seem to think of a funny reply to poet, but I had a great one for pet.
hmmmm.......
2006-09-11 14:33:51
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answer #9
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answered by Melissa C 5
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I don't think so. It sounds more like a ballad than a poem.
2006-09-11 14:34:40
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answer #10
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answered by Imagination 2
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