WHITE NOISE
DONT KNOW WHY IM STILL HERE THIS GOD AWFUL ATMOSPHERE
STARTING TO FEEL THE PIER PRESSURE KEEPS COMING NEAR
YOU CANT STAND MY LYRICAL SKILLS IM KILLING THEM AT WILL
STRAIGHT FROM THE TOP OF THE BILL
MY LIFES LIKE A SOUNDTRACK IM LOST AND CANT GET BACK
SO CUT ME SOME SLACK CAUSE I HAD ABOUT ENOUGH OF THAT
YOU BETTER STAND BACK AND RECONIZE DMONIZE SOUND OF THIS MUSIC TRACK
CAUSE WERE WHITE BOYS FROM THE WESTSIDE AND WE LIKE THE NOISE WE MAKE
WERE FROM THE FRONTLINE AND WE KNOW HOW TO RYHME ESPECIALLY
WHEN OUR LIVES AT STAKE
NO NEED TO DISGUISE HANDS TO THE SKY YOU KNOW HOW WE RIDE
SOUTH WEST SIDE LIVE LIFE LIKE A SUICIDE
THANK GOD IM ALIVE YOU KNOW WHAT IM LIKE IM GOD ON THE MIC
MAKE NO MISTAKE HOW EVER LONG IT TAKES IM WILLING TO WAIT
JUST AS LONG AS I GET MY BREAK ALWAYS GET MY FRILLS
TEN POUND DEALS FROM GIRLS IN SHORT SKIRTS AND HIGH HEELS
NEVER BEEN A SHY TYPE BUT FOR YOU I MIGHT CAUSE YOU JUST MY TYPE
GANGSTA FOR LIFE TAKING YOU TO THE NEXT LEVE
2006-09-11 05:52:23 · 11 answers · asked by Craig 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
LATE NIGHT TAKING THEIR TOLL ROCK N ROLL IM ON THE DOLE
WATCH AS THE CURTAINS ROLL TURN THE LIGHT DOWN REAL REAL LOW
AS I GO WITH MY LYRICAL FLOW SOME SAY IVE NO SOUL CAUSE ALL I WANT IS CONTROL IN A LIFE WITHOUT PAROLE BUT ITS TIME TO SET THE RECORD STRAIGHT FOR THOSE WITH A MUSICAL TASTE OR KNOWS WHAT IT TAKES TO MAKE IT IN THIS INDUSTRY
DONT EVEN TEST ME OR ILL BLOW UP ILL TAKE YOU ALL WITH ME
IVE HAD TOO MUCH OF THIS SO DONT **** ME OFF
IVE BEEN DRINKING ALL DAY AND I WONT GO AWAY
EVEN IF YOU TRY PUSH ME TOO FAR
ILL COME DOWN ON YOU SO ******* HARD
YOU WONT KNOW WHO YOU ARE YOUR BE WISHING UPON A STAR
BUT NOONE GONNA PRAY FOR YOU
NOBODY WILL MISS YOU WHEN YOUR GONE THERE STILL TAKE THE PISS OUT OF YOU ESPECIAILLY WHEN I SHOOT YOU WITH A GUN
2006-09-11 05:57:39 · update #1
6 and a half out of 10
2006-09-11 05:57:42 · answer #1 · answered by Lizzylovestodance 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like the rhymes, and the pattern and can see how it would work but think that the content (i.e. topics/themes) are fairly standard.
Particularly when reading them you want something that is a bit different. No disrespect but this is much like many self involved rhymes.
For good lyrical content (can't really call it Rap - as its not quite delivered like that) check out THE STREETS a guy from the UK real name Mike Skinner. Particularly the album "A grand don't come for free". The whole album is a series of stories about one character, each song moves the story along.
2006-09-11 05:59:44 · answer #2 · answered by Dave 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Decidedly average 5/10 stuff max
2006-09-11 06:05:54 · answer #3 · answered by Leanne 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too samey, 4 out of 10.
2006-09-11 05:59:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Can't honestly say I like them very much, especially the additional words you posted after the original post
2006-09-11 06:03:52 · answer #5 · answered by AzOasis8 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1 out of ten. The lyrics are boring and fill with trash
2006-09-11 22:13:17 · answer #6 · answered by Aditya 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do yourself a favour and get out of hiphop.
2006-09-11 05:58:49 · answer #7 · answered by Sarah G 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Not my cup of tea. I'm an old Fa*t, so don't count.
2006-09-11 06:03:29 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
pants
2006-09-11 06:02:03 · answer #9 · answered by lee b 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its good, trust me
2006-09-11 05:58:06 · answer #10 · answered by the one, the only ERMELINDA!!!!! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋