The Road Home (ROCK/RAP) c.rogers
ILL TAKE THE ROAD HOME HOME AND THE CAR THAT GOT IN THE WAY X4
SOMEONE MUST HAVE GOT MY NUMBER
DAMM FORTUNE TELLER KEEPS LOOKING OVER MY SHOULDER
DO YOU GET FED UP / WALK AROUND AROUND AIMLESS
TRY TO KEEPYOUR HEAD UP STOP ACTING FAMOUS
DONT SHOW YOUR CHARMS THERE WAY TOO STRONG
THOUGHT I WAS BLIND BUT ITS ALL IN MY MIND
DONT STOP DEAD KEEP ONE STEP AHEAD
YOUR MAN ACTS LIKE YOUR OLDER BROTHER
COMES OVER SAYS SOMETHING OUT OF NOWHERE
IM NOT EVEN ABOUT TO START TO BOTHER
BUT WHEN I CATCH THAT ***** *** MUTHA
IM COMING OUT SWINGING
IM A DIFFERENT KETTLE OF FISH
I WAS ON MY WAY HOME AND A CAR GOT IN MY WAY
AND THE CAR THAT GOT IN MY WAY
IM ON DEATHS DOOR STEP AND I HAVENT LONG LEFT
I SMOKE CIGERETTES WITH MY LAST DYING BREATH
ONLY GOD CANT STOP ME NOW BUT I DONT CARE LESS
I LIVE FOR THE MOMENT AND I HAVENT GOT NO REGRETS
SO IF YOU THINK YOU GET ONE OVER ME BEST THINK AGAIN
IN IT TO TO WIN IT I DONT GIVE A **** WHO I OFFEND
2006-09-11 05:12:54 · 17 answers · asked by Craig 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
to much cussing and i dont get it
2006-09-11 05:31:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
On a scale of 1 to 10(10 being perfect) I would give it a 1. It is lacking in structure, it doesn't flow very well, and if there is a point I don't see it. The first verse doesn't seem like it has anything to do with the rest of the song. Same for the "your man acts like your older brother." From what I can tell it looks like you are paranoid, you want to beat up someone, and then you got run over and decided to smoke a cigarette while you lay around and wait to die. It really isn't very offensive which makes the last line kind of absurd if you think about it.
2006-09-11 12:24:52 · answer #2 · answered by JAK 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thought they were abit confusing but definetly got potential!! just need to get them a bit smoother and easier to read..
I liked the line - ''I SMOKE CIGERETTES WITH MY LAST DYING BREATH''..
thats pressty catchy!!!
id say 5/10
2006-09-11 12:21:04 · answer #3 · answered by sianmog 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If your serious about your Lyrics you SHOULDN'T post them on the Internet UNLESS you have them COPY WRITTEN.
I think you have to put more time into your work meaning don't quit your day job!
2006-09-11 12:30:17 · answer #4 · answered by StillSxe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i give you a 2 for using bad worlds
2006-09-11 13:49:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ye not bad, you have got something!! would like to hear the finished article.
2006-09-11 12:17:25 · answer #6 · answered by GEO BHOY 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like all the rest to me.
2006-09-11 12:17:15 · answer #7 · answered by jelly-bean 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
s'ok. Would pass muster with quite a few people I expect.
2006-09-11 12:15:33 · answer #8 · answered by Lorraine R 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry my friend rock and rap just don't mix
I would suggest you use it in a rock format since rap is crap if you ask me
2006-09-11 12:27:04 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems really familiar to me, I am not saying you stole it, maybe just sampled.
2006-09-11 12:19:39 · answer #10 · answered by randomdude 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Who do you think we are, Simon Cowell
2006-09-11 12:21:41 · answer #11 · answered by clare s 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋