here's the sentence:
If only you would see my ______ fondness.
i'm writing a poem based on a shakespearean theme of love, so it needs to sound poetic. it should be a synonym of great, something like that. you could also change fondness to another word to help your word fit if need be. i only have 3 syllables to work with! thank you!
2006-09-10 13:39:42 · 11 answers · asked by sublimeasalime 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
it has to be ONE syllable and should be a synonym of GREAT.
2006-09-10 13:44:38 · update #1
here's my sonnet so far:
How shall I take your heart and make it mine?
I will love you from now until forever.
Until the last star has lost its radiant shine,
To declare my love will be my endeavor.
To the fathomless depths and beyond I'll go
And bare my soul with God as my witness,
All earthly possessions I shall forgo
If only you could see my ___ fondness.
that's it so far.
2006-09-10 13:47:31 · update #2
ardent
glowing
majestic
hope i helpd. you have to do the syllable count? ooh when i had to do a sonnet for class heck the teacher didnt really care lol. i'm sure it'll sound purdy tho
2006-09-10 13:42:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
How shall I take your heart and make it mine?
I will love you from now until forever.
Until the last star has lost its radiant shine,
To declare my love will be my endeavor.
To the fathomless depths and beyond I'll go
And bare my soul with God as my witness,
All earthly possessions I shall forgo
If only you could see into my self - careless...
2006-09-10 21:16:17 · answer #2 · answered by simi 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It looks more like you need an adjective, since there is no word you are asking for a synonym for.
I would suggest "ardent."
2006-09-10 20:43:25 · answer #3 · answered by thylawyer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here are some synonyms: awesome, excellent, fantastic, cool, wonderful. Hope one of these is what you're looking for.
2006-09-10 20:46:19 · answer #4 · answered by Leilani 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bright
It would go well with the star imagery in an earlier line.
2006-09-11 00:30:37 · answer #5 · answered by Frey 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about "If only you would see my august love"?
2006-09-10 20:46:38 · answer #6 · answered by Tennessee Chick 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
vast
deep
2006-09-10 22:01:12 · answer #7 · answered by dragonrider707 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
intensive
2006-09-10 20:45:58 · answer #8 · answered by WizD 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
exquisite
2006-09-10 20:42:44 · answer #9 · answered by Justsyd 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
devoted? grand? enormous? vast?sky-sized?PASSIONATE?
2006-09-10 20:48:50 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋