As a result of Benjamin Franklin's inventions today we have library's, fire departments, world wide postal services, and electricity. He Impacted the repeal of the stamp act, and shaped the American Revolution by his writings and ideas. Also he encouraged the signing of the constitution by giving a moving speech.
2006-09-10 12:02:05 · 7 answers · asked by aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
That's not a thesis statement. Ask yourself if it can be reversed into an antithesis.
Benjamin Franklin was repsonsible for many modern institutions and inventions, including public libraries, fire departments, the connecting of national postal services into a worldwide service, and the discovery of the nature of electricity. He impacted the Stamp Act, and helped shape the American Revolution with his writings and ideas. Among his inventions were the pot bellied stove and bifocal lenses.
Note: The signing of the Constitution was a result of the application of his ideas, and needn't be repeated in this statement.
2006-09-10 12:13:53 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
D+ material. Sentence structure is poor. Grammar is poor (library's implies possessive, not plural). The overall premise is not supported by facts.
Libraries, fire departments, and postal service were not the result of inventions, but rather ideas. Understand the differences between the result of inventions and technology versus the role of innovation and business style managements.
His role in the use of electricity also has nothing to do with inventions, but rather his naturalistic observations. The tale about the kite with a key is likely apocryphal, and should be treated as such.
Finally, you reference THE stamp act. I can only assume that you are referring to the Stamp Act of 1765. Be sure to clarify which Stamp Act Franklin was involved with or against.
2006-09-10 12:17:35 · answer #2 · answered by Jim T 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it has puncuation errors,it should be a little direct by sayng that Benjamin Franklin im proved life for Americans today because of his inventions and types of services and electricity. mentioning the impotant stamp act and the other information about his writings. show how life has changed before he became president and today.
2006-09-10 13:27:02 · answer #3 · answered by christina p 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-09-30 13:35:07 · answer #4 · answered by Erika 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a good start but like try not to use words they gave you in the prompt or essay question(cuz thats what it sounds like)
2006-09-10 13:25:23 · answer #5 · answered by BeKoo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a great thesis.....
2006-09-10 12:08:41 · answer #6 · answered by TommyGun 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u suck at even asking a question....
2006-09-10 12:08:04 · answer #7 · answered by cheenarca 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋