my friend just killed himself and i need help?

Question

im writing this song about suicide and not to do it but i need help on some lines. its gonna be this kinda slow song and i already got the chorus down . my friend accidently choked himself to death by doing the choking game thing and im writing this song cause his family wanted me too and my friend was still a teenager when he died


so put some lines down below like

you were too young man its your life you werent able to finish,
if you had problems dawg you could've told me i would've been there in a minute,

and stuff like that

Answer 1

I know that's not the way you wanted to go,
'Cause in the end there's nothin to show
But this pain that you left behind
And no peace for us to find.
It was your life, yea, that much is true,
But it's us left behind to clean up after you.
Why'd you do it, for some fun?
Why not just chill out with someone?
I was there, you know it's true,
But did you think about how much we'd be missin' you?
I hope you think your story was good while game was on
'Cause it was a short story not long, and that's wrong,
I'm trying to learn and get something from it all,
And maybe the best I can do is call
For a friend when I'm in a hurricane
So no one else will go through this pain.

Answer 2

Honestly, I don't think anyone can help ypu write this song. Only you can bring something to it becuase you've felt the pain of loss. Don't rush yourself. Take your time and the words will come. God Bless

You've got a nice start.

Answer 3

that really sucks, my bestfriend died about two years ago in a car crash and I found a band later and we learned and reacored one of his songs. put it on a cd and gave it to his family.

when it comes to writing lyrics, if the words don't come to mind, turn off anything that is a distraction and stay focased. the words will eventually come

Answer 4

what was you thinking, it was a game, Im here and hurting, its not your pain. we were just kids, a life time ahead, but this stupid game ,and now you are dead. Is anyone out there, can anyone hear, last week was a blast, we had so much fun,yesterdays game turned you back to dust, tomorrow is gone, no future left, what have we done, to our body, ourself, If I could turn back time, but now theres no chance, your gone, im alone, your family, your friends.

Answer 5

thats soo sad that he died!! i feel for u, but i dont no crap so srry! i want to be a singer but not now, and maybe ill get better at making songs...la8er! so srry and i soo feel for u man! lots of love!
~vlz~

Answer 6

"when you went away
you took me with you.
dont you understand
we all loved you

listen to your heart
why did you do that
you hurt all of us
you tore us apart

please listen to me
all i have to say
will be for you
and thats all there will be

i loved you and you loved me
together we were brothers as great as can be

dont you see
you've hurt me
you've hurt me

Answer 7

like riding a roller coaster that's out of control.......you can't stop the exhilaration though when it stops you'll never want to ride agin.........the thrill is gone...........some things are best left alone............

Answer 8

why do u need the help and that boy killed his self you need to go to church and het help by the lord

Answer 9

i have no ideas