tell me what you think?

Question

tell me what you think about my poem

have you ever loved an animal so much that he or she felt like a brother or sister and one day they left whith no sighn no signal that they where leaving your forced to forget but you can't the memories hurt but to know that theyy'll never come back kills you inside

Answer 1

then remember and cherish those memories......a remarkable thing to love...be love be loved....don't be concerned on forgetting...go for understanding.........cheers

Answer 2

if your going to write a poem that's is suppose to be emotive be more descriptive and you don't really have a particular style that stands out. it think you need more practice and you should expand your vocabulary so you can have a more varied work . i can see what your trying to do but you don't communicate it properly. also it would make it more better if you punctuate it can really make the difference cause then it will read different and better also you can try playing with the syntax of the sentence. all in all good start it just needs refining.

Answer 3

YES im so sorry i love all animals but yeah my cat got out right after katrina and i never could find him and it kills me that i don't know what happened to him.....

Answer 4

Poor you. I'm sure its doing ok. Animals know how to survive.

I think the poem is sincere

Answer 5

i loved some of my pets but not like a brother or sister that is a little extrme so i am going to say
no

Answer 6

My cat Pumpkin was like a son to me. He died in 1999 and I was more devastated over his death than humans I loved who died.

Answer 7

you are strong, and you must remember that what happends happends for a reason.

Answer 8

No.