Does anybody like poetry? I love it!
I do it when i feel sad, mad, angry, and sick.
One day i would love to become one.
Now this is one of my poems : The crystals in your eyes shine through the heavens, and above the seas, through out the valleys, and on the mountains. Your eyes are as blue to me and as blue as the unique sea your eyes mean everything to me.
2006-09-10 08:27:59 · 7 answers · asked by hello 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I love poetry and would like to start a Yahoo poetry group. Your poem was honest and adventurous but sounded like you were working too hard on the last line. Keep on truckin'.
2006-09-10 08:32:45 · answer #1 · answered by starmoishe 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, if you plan to visit or live near Venice, FL. Check out http://poetsrule.com which is a bunch of poets that meet at used bookstore there is no fee with this club and at the website they have place where there are words or phrases which you can try weave a poem(s), but it is not mandatory since they only do that for fun which what poetry should be about. They will see if you will recite some of your poetry, but it is not mandatory either. It is a little better the www.poetry.com which will give you generic flattering letter about being good poet and for $70 buy the book and a small chance of winning one of their cash prizes, but more getting an editor's choice award if you did buy their book. I find that place more wants you to write more checks then poems. If you do live near Venice, you could go to your local library or may be bookstores for a local poetry group near you would be better then poetry.com.
2006-09-13 02:48:34 · answer #2 · answered by stardancerpoet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poetry. I have been writing poetry for about 6 years. I have well over 200 poems to my name. It is a hobby I use to express my feelings. It is an excellent place to let it all out. I concur; the last line is overworked, it doesn't flow right but keep at it. You'll find the perfect line soon. Let me know about that poetry group @ poet.20.charis@xoxy.net
2006-09-10 08:36:21 · answer #3 · answered by Charis 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love poetry. I have been writing poetry for about 4 years. I have well over 368 poems to my name that i have written since 7th grade . It is a hobby I use to express my feelings and i try to write atleast one everyday or so. I have won 3 editor's choice award's from poetry.com and also had invites to over 6different national gatherings. My only wish is to get atleast one poem published before i turn 21 and im 17 now. Here's one of my poems titled Single red rose (sentence form.)
only one red rose. growns in this old garden. which nobody tends to anymore. years have gone by and everything is dead. except for the lonely red rose. that shows the passion of how strong our love is. your words stay close to my heart. just like the. one red rose. that still lives on.
your poem was great but i aslo agree that you haven't quite found the perfect line to tie up all loose ends yet and keep up the good work, people need to take poetry to heart and appreciate it like i do.
please tell me what you think good or bad and also let me know about that poetry forum irishbaby_05@yahoo.com
2006-09-12 02:59:38 · answer #4 · answered by irishbaby_05 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Everywhere you go
From sea to shining sea
'Rons are there before you
Which makes you gripe-e
You cannot reason with 'Rons
Cause they don't understand
They are what they are
No matter what country or land
What we need are more limits
Educating the Dons
Would make this statement true
We don't need any mo'Rons
2006-09-10 08:34:23 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is pretty good!
keep on writing, don't be afraid to make mistakes and have a laugh!
2006-09-10 08:34:27 · answer #6 · answered by nev 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
difficult problem. research using the search engines. this could actually help!
2015-04-29 17:45:28 · answer #7 · answered by Heather 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋