I'm me of course, and I was born at a very young age... I like humor, and will try to make you laugh.. silence is comfortable... i like to immersively lose myself in a good long (novel, trilogy, series) book or computer game...
hmmm I'm still me... I'm caring, extroverted, adventurous, easy going, hard working(when needed), sarcastic, sometimes curious, sometimes content to let the mystery remain unsolved, flexible, sometimes steady and sometimes responsive, passionate and able to cope with most things given some time, focused, but still able to adapt, organized (mostly), casual manner and dress, I would rather be comfortable than fashionable, and would rather have a friend than an enemy. And I like passing on knowledge that I have gained.
2006-09-09 04:22:12 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Take out the "" I'm me""" remarks..........." Born at a very young age is funny...but then add one more joke after that. ....on the "hard working when needed " part.......take out the "when needed"..it makes you seem lazy, and that you only work to get JUST enough $$ to make it by, and woman want a man who can provide for them. And your second to last sentence is extremely LONG... break it up into about 3 sentences. On the last sentence, so not begin it with "And"... because with proper English, sentences cannot begin with "And". I would take out the "sometimes steady, sometimes responsive" part.........it doesn't make sense. The two things do not go together. And woman want someone who is ALWAYS responsive. OH, and on saying you are "sarcastic"... say "" like to joke around and be sarcastic sometimes"...because no one wants someone who is always sarcastic. That can get old really soon. That just made me think of what you can add after " Born young"... put "" Planning on living until I am somewhat older"............( haha ) :)
2006-09-09 04:31:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ok First of all the first part about being born at a young age...LOSE THAT! Wasn't everybody? I like what you wrote about being humerous all the way up to you can lose your self in a good long novel ...cross out computer game part!..sounds geeky and sounds as if you would be wrapped up in playing the computer game too much when your suppose to be getting to know a person. To write about yourself that your caring, adventurous, easy going hard working (when need be) that good enough. What I have stated here in a nutshell is all I would want to know all the rest was too much info and I actually stopped reading past the middle. It got boring..Make the changes and I bet you'll do great!! Other than that i though it was good. Good Luck with dating i'm sure you'll find somebody great, you sound like a nice guy!
2006-09-09 11:42:00 · answer #2 · answered by Jennifer W 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its fine except for born at very young age that kinda is corny well hope my answer helped
2006-09-09 11:24:47 · answer #3 · answered by What's Your Poison? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think everyone was born at a very young age....
2006-09-09 11:24:01 · answer #4 · answered by RKO 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good, if you are a woman i would like it . if you are a guy that might work on a woman.
2006-09-09 11:28:09 · answer #5 · answered by party_2_hearty 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's intriguing. Good luck!
2006-09-09 11:25:06 · answer #6 · answered by noyb 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋