Please, do not laugh or say it sucks. If it does then just leave positive feedback anyways, with some advice.
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Are We There Yet?
We've seen every city
Every highway
We know everone we've met
But, are we there yet?
Where else is there to go?
The endless oceans of togetherness?
Do we want that?
Will you say yes?
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2006-09-08 18:53:30 · 14 answers · asked by bag1794 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Really nice poem. it is kinda philosophical...that humans keep yearning for something. their life's destination is vague. just the last sentence doesnt seem to fit.
2006-09-08 18:59:33 · answer #1 · answered by uma p 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was beautiful and for your first time to and I am not lying because I don't like to lie!!
2006-09-09 02:06:18 · answer #2 · answered by Wolf Apple 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a good start!
2006-09-09 01:55:56 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's ok, needs more depth
2006-09-09 01:57:40 · answer #4 · answered by Zell D 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it. sometimes small words say and mean a lot.
2006-09-09 01:56:37 · answer #5 · answered by p_hibin 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would have to say pretty good for your first one.
2006-09-09 01:55:22 · answer #6 · answered by Ozark American 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
oi
2006-09-09 02:11:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad.
2006-09-09 01:55:54 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
...hey ...very nice POEM....REALLL EEE
..HI,...LOL....PLEASED TO MEET YOU
...i really think its nice...poetic gesturing
short but comprehendable
- - rr
2006-09-09 01:57:58 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes it is good.......is this a proposal poem?
2006-09-09 01:55:18 · answer #10 · answered by Lisa 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋