i wrote a poem at school yesterday for darian, i don't know if she liked it or not. heres how it went:
i'd say this in person,
i would try,
but then i'd see
you beautiful eyes
my heart would stop,
my mind would freeze
my stomach would drop
to my knees
with you cute brown hair
and the little blonde streaks,
anyone who makes fun of you,
i consider them freaks.
2006-09-07 16:37:36 · 13 answers · asked by The Boy NextDoor 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
it's cute...she should be honered that someone spent so much time writing a poem to her
2006-09-07 16:40:52 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd have to say that it was sweet in the begining but then when you reached the
"with you cute brown hair
and the little blonde streaks,
anyone who makes fun of you,
i consider them freaks."
It died immensly I mean I'd laugh at this...(but hey at least you didnt spell entire with an i...i got a note from a guy with that incorrection)hahaha not to be mean but its not romantic
2006-09-07 16:43:59 · answer #2 · answered by "Chanel-o" 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is a nice peom if someone gave it to me i would think it was sweet so tell the girl the poem and make it sound better than it would on paper
2006-09-07 16:39:54 · answer #3 · answered by K-Dubb 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THAT'S A NICE POEM, DID SHE SAY ANYTHING TO YOU AFTER YOU GAVE HER THE POEM? IF SHE DIDN'T THAT MEANS SHE DINT LIKE YOU AND MOVE ON YOU ARE TO YOUNG TO BE WASTING YOUR TIME WITH HER FIND SOMEONE ELSE WHO WILL LIKE YOUR POEMS.
2006-09-07 16:41:32 · answer #4 · answered by LILYANNA69 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's sweet but the last 2 lines kinda make me laugh
2006-09-07 16:40:37 · answer #5 · answered by fergi909 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would say it was nice until you made her self conscious about people making fun of her..
2006-09-07 16:40:06 · answer #6 · answered by serenitynow 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its kind of romantic. Ask her how she felt when she read it. She will admire you for asking her and listening to her.
2006-09-07 16:40:54 · answer #7 · answered by Becky 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
haha it starts off alright but then it gets funny. Ask her if she liked it.
2006-09-07 16:39:38 · answer #8 · answered by MJ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
bogus dude! you hit the hilt with that one! she'll flip inside out for you!
2006-09-07 16:40:18 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
instead of you say your
i don't love the end
2006-09-07 16:42:30 · answer #10 · answered by R ♥ I ♥ P ♥ Casey Calvert 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋