i wrote a poem at school yesterday for darian, i don't know if she liked it or not. heres how it went:
i'd say this in person,
i would try,
but then i'd see
you beautiful eyes
my heart would stop,
my mind would freeze
my stomach would drop
to my knees
with you cute brown hair
and the little blonde streaks,
anyone who makes fun of you,
i consider them freaks.
2006-09-07 00:07:34 · 17 answers · asked by The Boy NextDoor 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
OMG THATS SOOO SWEEEET!!!! i would love it if i got it. did you make it up yourself? you are very talented!
2006-09-07 00:09:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
um
i'd say this in person,
i would try,
but then i'd see
you beautiful eyes
my heart would stop,
my mind would freeze
my stomach would drop
to my knees
with you cute brown hair
and the little blonde streaks,
Thats all good but the end try something a little different the name calling would throw me off a little bit!! otherwise very nice!!!
2006-09-07 07:10:48 · answer #2 · answered by ~Bethany~ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its cute, but i remember having a boyfriend in high school (don't know how old u are) and he wrote me letters and poem...and when i was like 15 and 16 that freaked me out...i thought the guy was weird!
2006-09-07 07:10:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is sweet! I don't know any girl who would like their man to make up a poem just for them! She should feel special! It's so romantic!
2006-09-07 07:12:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow!Its sooo sweet poem.Did u make it urself???If I'll get it I'll love it!!!!And I'm sure DARIAN will like it too.Go for it and give it to her.
2006-09-07 07:25:57 · answer #5 · answered by Firdaus 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good but no conclusion.
Suggest this for inclusion
I am too wet in profusion
Get right in in this confusion
I am ready for an implosion
so do it till it is explosion
2006-09-07 07:37:39 · answer #6 · answered by openpsychy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
mm thats a good poem.she liked it of course it is such a nice one.u r a good poet too.practise and you'll make a good one
2006-09-07 07:11:16 · answer #7 · answered by chocklatyy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah not bad for grade 4
2006-09-07 07:09:45 · answer #8 · answered by Fiji_bound2007 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwwww that's sooooo cute a bit freaky but cute
2006-09-07 07:10:04 · answer #9 · answered by sweetlily 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its such a cute and sweet poem, i'm sure she liked it :)
go ahead, write her other poems.
2006-09-07 07:27:47 · answer #10 · answered by cebukitty 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
rrrrrrrrrrrrrr that is soooooooooo cute. she would be crazy not t like that . x go get your girl x
2006-09-07 07:16:57 · answer #11 · answered by sensual 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋