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Lengkong Wetan village is situated near main road connecting Bintaro to Serpong (SOME ARE ASPHALTED AND SOME HAVE HOLES). The public transportation available is C-06 small van plying the route that runs from “Marketing Office of BSD” to “Ciledug”.

2006-09-05 19:25:44 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture Languages

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Well, it is parallel, but it's not very clear.
First, you should have "is situated near the main road", or perhaps "a main road" or "the main roads". The "some" only makes sense if you use "roads", assuming you mean a series of roads. Otherwise, you could say "part of the route is asphalted (I would say "paved" instead) and part of it has holes". Even then, it's not clear if the same part is asphalted and has holes (if so, I'd call them "potholes") or if you're using "have holes" to mean "unpaved". But I would think having holes is worse than being merely unpaved.

Maybe this:
(Only part of the route is asphalted, and part of it is quite rough.)--if there are a lot of holes.
or (Only part of the route is paved.)--if the unpaved part is in decent shape.


By the way, I'd add a "the" before "C-06" if that's the route number, or "a" if that's the kind of small van. And "the" before "Marketing Office of BSD" unless that's the name of the busstop.

2006-09-05 20:14:34 · answer #1 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0 0

Lengkong Wetan village is situated near the main roads connecting Bintaro to Serpong, only some of which are smooth and paved. A C-06 small van provides public transportation between the marketing Office of BSD and Ciledug.

2006-09-06 16:56:44 · answer #2 · answered by Margaret L 1 · 0 0

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