my poem do u like?

Question

what dose everyone thing of this unfishisned poem

to my secret velintine
from your lovely susnshine

i know am not as smart as Einstine
but im still your sunshine

i should have love you more in time
but instead i drink summer wine gasping in the sunshine

i clambed the masculine pine and dreamed of my sweet sunshine and are secret velintine

your mine mine in the sweet rays of sunshine

your as sweet as turpentine from a masculine pine

i wish you were mine so we could make love in the sunshine


how do i edited it to a poem from and anyone would like to add on to all my mis sakes go head hit me

Answer 1

Turpentine is not so much sweet, as it is a toxic poison.

Answer 2

spell check and try different rhyming words

Answer 3

nice try