Here sits my mountain before me.
A difficult trying climb
I shall not shirk this challenge.
This journey that is mine.
I have before me my equipment.
All that I will need.
I have my faith, my family,
And good friends indeed.
God grant me strength for the journey.
And time to stop and rest.
I know I will reach that summit,
I am sure I can stand the test.
And when I have climbed it fully
And I watch the sun as it sets.
I will marvel at my journey.
And feel no true regrets
2006-09-04 16:55:49 · 16 answers · asked by Debra M. Wishing Peace To All 7 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Anyone of course can read and comment I just didn't want the reference to God to insult anyone.
2006-09-04 17:00:41 · update #1
Yes it is one I have written.
2006-09-04 17:05:05 · update #2
Beautiful!God Bless you!
2006-09-04 19:04:55 · answer #1 · answered by Sweetheart 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my first thought , after reading your writing, was how are you going to get down from this precipice? some say it is easier to climb up a steep embankment.... But have you ever experienced the decent? it is often times more trying than the accent. your writing i believe was meant to cause thoughts about trying times of life and how one overcomes adversity. (you stated your ideas nicely) you have accomplished what i think you intended. but once the summit has been conquered then what? on to the next...i suppose.
2006-09-05 00:20:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it is very well done. Why is it only for CHRISTIANS? Anyone can enjoy reading this poem. To make it a Christian poem you may want to use the word Jesus in the context. The word GOD can be anything,,,Buddha, The creator, Mohammad or anything, even a doorknob. Do you see my point?
2006-09-05 00:05:24 · answer #3 · answered by GiGi 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I have climb such a mountain, with God holding my hand, encouraging me, in many ways.
God lead me to this Bible verse in time of need...
When he has tested me, I shall come forth as gold.
Job 23:10
NICE POEM
2006-09-05 00:11:53 · answer #4 · answered by inteleyes 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2006-09-04 23:58:51 · answer #5 · answered by owali1 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is a very beautiful poem. I can't see anything wrong with it. It showing how life is a hard climb. My hat off to you
2006-09-05 00:01:32 · answer #6 · answered by rebel_southern_cableman2000 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. Keep writing what God gives you to write.
2006-09-05 00:01:06 · answer #7 · answered by BAnne 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats our problem you have some foreign a.. ho.. makin' the f*#(*))_Ing rules. the poem is great and god does not insult me. our goverment does by listening to illegals. they put them first. i think GOD GOD GOD GOD JESUS is great. keep writing you do a wonderful job and don't let any foreign bas....ard make you feel ashamed. i don't
2006-09-05 00:14:14 · answer #8 · answered by nakita 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is truly beautiful Debra, I guess it is speaking of the journey of life.
2006-09-05 00:06:49 · answer #9 · answered by Tinkerbelle 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it is a wonderful poem. Did you write it? It is very good.
2006-09-05 00:04:40 · answer #10 · answered by Noor 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋