I imagine you wearing glasses. You collect things. You’ve got a whole box of little elephants. When you see a happy elephant figure in a shop, you can’t help, and you have to buy it.
I don’t know why, but I think you are going to become a dancer. I think you go to dance class.You like ballet. And you’re defiantly good at running and swimming.
I think you are a competitive person. You always fight with your younger brother. You like winning. Sport or studying - you like to be first. But you prefer working in a team. Then, you win for your team and it makes you happy.
Your biggest passion are dinosaurs. You read about them a lot and even collect pictures of them. You like eggs for breakfast and you drink five glasses of milk every evening.
2006-09-04 04:31:43 · 12 answers · asked by Zibie 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
How about you doing your own homework?
If you get some incorrect answers, then you should be able to learn from your mistakes and become a better student by relying on yourself, and not others to do your work for you.
2006-09-04 04:38:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
I imagine you wearing glasses. You collect things. You have a whole box of little elephants. When you see a happy elephant figure in a shop, you can't help it, you have to buy it.
I don't know why, but I think you are going to become a dancer. I think you take dance classes. You like ballet, and you are definitely good at running and swimming.
I think you are a competitive person. You always fight with your younger brother.You like to win. In sports or school, you like to be first. However, you prefer working in a team, and when you win for your team it makes you happy.
Your biggest passion is dinosaurs. You read about them alot and collect pictures of them. You like eggs for breakfast and drink five glasses of milk every evening.
Hope this helps!
2006-09-04 04:48:07 · answer #2 · answered by MadeaQueenOfScotts 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Spelling is good. What it needs only sentence correlation.
I imagine you to wear glasses. You love to collect things. You got a whole box of little elephants. Everytime, you see an elephant figure in a shop, you feel the urge to buy it.
By going to dance classes, I won't be surprised if you become a good ballet dancer. You also like the sports and are a good runner and a good. swimmer.
You enjoy competition and winning; so much that you tend to fight with your younger brother. You like to excel in sports and in school. You always aspire for the first place. But of course you are a team player. You are very happy when your team wins.
The other hobby you have, is collecting pictures of dinosaurs. You love to read about them.
For breakfast, you like eggs. You drink five glasses of milk every evening.,to stay fit.
2006-09-06 14:00:22 · answer #3 · answered by rosieC 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you say "you" way too many times. It is very redundant, though not exactly an error. In the first sentence of the last paragraph, it should read "is" rather than "are." Also, you need to organize your thoughts better. Eggs and milk have nothing to do with dinosaurs.
2006-09-04 04:40:19 · answer #4 · answered by smartee 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First, use your spell check, then change in first paragraph, you can't help, and have to buy it....to... you can't resist buying it. Make your final sentence into a separate paragraph.
Congratulations on writing a lot as separate words. Most English speakers make the mistake of writing is as alot.
2006-09-04 05:03:11 · answer #5 · answered by beez 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
definitely is the correct spelling, not defiantly
"your biggest passion is dinosaurs". not ARE. There is only one passion, so it is not plural.
I would also suggest "you can't help it" instead of just "you can't help"
2006-09-04 04:37:46 · answer #6 · answered by ho_ho_ho_merry_thursday 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thanks for telling me it's English.
I imagine you're wearing glasses
You can't help it.
I think you go to dancing classes
You're definitely...
If you win for your team ....
Your biggest passion is.....
Wasn't bad!
2006-09-04 04:41:23 · answer #7 · answered by cymry3jones 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-06 09:19:40 · answer #8 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are errors in sentences
2006-09-04 04:47:58 · answer #9 · answered by baheramgor 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your grammar needs attention and also how your sentences are constructed.
2006-09-04 04:38:21 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋