can you check this text for errors, please? (english)?

Question

i hope you can help and point me where are mistakes.

When you were younger you hated dolls. You played cars. You want to become a professional driver.
Your favourite TV program is ‘Fakty’ on ‘tvn’.
You like smurfs. If you could, you would paint yourself blue. You also like green and you want to live in a little house in forest one day.
I imagine you as a very talented person. You probably play a musical instrument. Maybe, the piano or the saxophone.
I think you are a solitary type. You like to spend time on your own, but you’re a great team member. You prefer team sports to individual sports.
To me, your name sounds like a name of an actress. You want to become a famous movie star. You also like gardening, and there are a lot of flowers standing on the window-sills in your house.
I think you are a bit shy, but to friends you’re very open. You like telling jokes. You also like helping your father in the kitchen.

Answer 1

In the beginning you started in the past tense (hated, played...) but then you switched to present tense.
The past tense needs to be consistent; You wanted... program was... You liked...

OR change the beginning so that the whole thing is present tense.

Answer 2

There are no spelling errors that I can find. Very little in the text shows that english is not your native language. I have corrected three or four grammar faults, but you could use less periods and more commas and semi-colons; the text seems "choppy" with this many periods.

When you were younger you hated dolls; you played *with toy* cars *instead*. You *wanted* to become a professional driver.
Your favourite TV program is ‘Fakty’ on ‘tvn’.
You like smurfs. If you could, you would paint yourself blue. You also like green and you want to live in a little house in *the* forest one day.
I imagine you as a very talented person. You probably play a musical instrument; maybe the piano or the saxophone.
I think you are *the* solitary type. You like to spend time on your own, but you’re a great team *player*. You prefer team sports to individual sports.
To me, your name sounds like *the* name of an actress. You want to become a famous movie star. You also like gardening, and there are a lot of flowers standing on the window-sills in your house.
I think you are a bit shy, but to friends you’re very open. You like telling jokes. You also like helping your father in the kitchen.

Answer 3

When you were younger you hated dolls. You played with cars. You want to become a professional driver.
Your favourite TV program is ‘Fakty’ on ‘tvn’.
You like smurfs. If you could, you would paint yourself blue. You also like green and you want to live in a little house in a forest one day.
I imagine you are a very talented person. You probably play a musical instrument. Maybe, the piano or the saxophone.
I think you are a solitary type. You like to spend time on your own, but you’re a great team member. You prefer team sports to individual sports.
To me, your name sounds like a name of an actress. You want to become a famous movie star. You also like gardening, and there are a lot of flowers standing on the window-sills in your house.
I think you are bit shy, but to friends you’re very open. You like telling jokes. You also like helping your father in the kitchen.

Answer 4

hit the spell check button