(It currently still has two sentences)
Attempts to foster understanding between various players through lasting dialogue is needed. The dialogue is built upon the spirit of transparency.
2006-08-30 15:26:01 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
First I consider this a waste of time, but here is your sentence broken down.
Attempts
to foster understanding
between various players
through lasting dialog [is needed]. The dialog is
built upon the spirit of transparency
Keeping it in you rambling style, you get:
Attempts to foster understanding between various players through lasting dialog built upon the spirit of transparency is [are] needed.
Note the subject is "attempts" and the predicate is "are needed" You thought is "attempts are needed".
Yes it is one sentence matching your original (useless) goal of one sentence. This is not a run on sentence but a poorly (breath taking) rambling of the English language.
2006-08-30 15:41:23 · answer #1 · answered by J. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Attempts to foster understanding between various players is built upon the spirit of transparency and lasting dialogue.
2006-08-30 15:36:08 · answer #2 · answered by ldbroyles 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lasting dialogue, built upon the spirit of transparency, is needed to foster understanding between various players.
2006-08-30 15:34:10 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A lasting dialogue, built upon the spirit of transparency, is needed to foster understanding between the various players.
2006-08-30 15:33:36 · answer #4 · answered by seandashark 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dialogue , built upon the spirit of transparency, is needed to foster an understanding between various players.
2006-08-30 15:29:36 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 0⤋
Lasting dialog, built upon the spirit of transparency, is needed to foster understanding between the various players.
2006-08-30 15:32:23 · answer #6 · answered by JohnEBoy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
attempts to foster understanding between various players through lasting dialoge built upon the spirit of transparency is needed.
2006-08-30 15:36:42 · answer #7 · answered by krystalbay2005 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If we want to foster understanding, we need dialogue and a spirit of transparency.
Go active voice, you know. And don't repeat the stuff about dialogue.
2006-08-30 15:35:13 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the dialog it built upon the spirit of transparency to foster understanding between various players is needed.
2006-08-30 15:30:37 · answer #9 · answered by mat 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Attempts to use transparent dialogue between the parties to create understanding is needed.
2006-08-30 15:29:58 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋