very poetic..is it you?
then watch out it's a wild world out there.....
the one one who surrendered to the laws of gravity,
the one who love when not loved in return...
the one who waits..not knowing when he'll return
is the one who loves so dearly & true..
is the one who awaits the pain.. the hurt..& tears..
but did you know...
the flowers bloom & the butterfiles dance..
the birds sing while the skys shine...
& the moon beams come down
to kiss the river bank...
the world is a beautiful place...
when you love someone....
thus very little people can see
in the eyes of yours...
you & me & a few to be counted
but did you know we are best...
& next time when your eyes blink,
let no tears rundown your cheeks
let the sweet smile shine on your lips!
+love
(from a similar heart*)
2006-08-29 23:44:22
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answered by Anonymous
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Wow if u wrote this u have talent girlfriend... this is so true i completly agree with this... although some could go for love and not just life too... which makes it even better!!!
2006-08-30 06:28:35
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answered by Skye 5
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Just wemember what
Mr Wong told Mrs Wong at the hospital...
Two Wongs don't make a white..
2006-08-30 06:35:20
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answered by satnee2003 5
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This is a beautiful poem indeed, but I disagree with the title. This is not what life IN GENERAL is about. What you described here is what ONE life (presumbably yours) is about. This is not the scheme for the standard life.
2006-08-30 06:27:07
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answered by Cheshire Riddle 6
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Very thoughful, inciteful and overflowing with emotion. Whomever inspires this within you is a lucky person. Keep it up.
2006-08-30 06:35:08
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answered by D baby 3
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is,,it all the life about,,three cheers for a sweet poem,,u ain't wrong but ,even u know illusions are beyond imaginations ,,so be practical ,,
2006-08-30 06:43:28
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answered by savage garden 1
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Girl that's so beautiful, it's like you described the way i feel as well. That's deep girlfriend!!!
2006-08-30 06:42:45
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answered by Anonymous
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ure wrong, just read the first line, try writing a bit shorter!!! nxt tym
2006-08-30 06:44:47
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answered by tariq k 4
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u r a true lover
i pray to god that he gives me same lover as u
2006-08-30 06:29:30
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answered by ms attitude 2
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I could tell you that you are wrong, but that would make me wrong
2006-08-30 06:33:03
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answered by want2wild 5
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