There is no god.
There is a creator, you can call the creator god if you wish.
For those of you who believe in evolution you are wrong. For those of you who are christians, catholics and mormons, you have been mislead.
It's never nice to mock any one, but I don't understand or comprehand why it is so hard to see the truth. Its right there in front of all of us. Simple to find, just by looking. Why do you all refuse to look? Maybe that's why I have written this book. So you can see what you are missing and what is the correct theroy of why we are here, and who made us. Scoff if you may but the truth will reveal itself. Only if you wish to continue to read this book.
I am writing a book on what the truth is in my oppion. Giving detailed theories on questions that may confuse people nowadays. This paragraph is the first in my book. Does it make you want to continue reading, or does it turn you off?
I could easly rewrite it I must. Please give an honest oppinon.
2006-08-29 08:09:16 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Here's the problem, you're telling people they are wrong based on a book that you are openly admitting is about "truth in your opinion." I don't understand why anyone should accept your opinion as a ultimate source of truth.
But honestly, to answer your question, if you want people to consider your ideas, don't start with "you are all wrong!" That's definitely a turn-off. Just simply explain what you're thinking, and invite them to further explore your ideas.
2006-08-29 08:16:28 · answer #1 · answered by daisyk 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Everyone is entitled to their opinion, and yours deserves to be heard as much as anyone else. Just one point though, anyone can come up with a theory but to be taken seriously you will need some sort of proof, preferably already historically recorded.
I read the dead sea scrolls once they were published, it made a mockery of the bible, yet it is the oldest written form of the bible.
Good luck with the book. hope it does well.
2006-08-29 08:18:16 · answer #2 · answered by m0rrell 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
LOL No god and no evolution? But a 'creator' that may or may not be called a god?
What is this truth you have that has been hidden to all others?
2006-08-29 08:16:12 · answer #3 · answered by mikayla_starstuff 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Hmm, so far it seems like I'm the only interested. That paragraph grabbed MY attention which is a very important step in writing. But it varies from person to person.
2006-08-29 08:18:10 · answer #4 · answered by missy81 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Honestly, it sounds more like an op-ed piece in the NY Times.
Your misspelling of "opinion" 2ice turned me off it.
2006-08-29 08:18:19 · answer #5 · answered by STILL standing 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-17 19:19:00 · answer #6 · answered by leitner 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like you are starting your own religion. Good luck! Remember what P.T. Barnum said: There's a sucker born every minute!
2006-08-29 08:15:11 · answer #7 · answered by answermann 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your spelling and grammar are poor.
Your philosophy/theory reads like you are claiming God-prophet status.
2006-08-29 08:15:50 · answer #8 · answered by kingstubborn 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I totally disagree with what you wrote. Reading this one paragraph would make me want to burn the book and bury its ashes deep underground.
2006-08-29 08:17:17 · answer #9 · answered by C-Lay "L" 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It doesn't make me want to read any more of the book.
2006-08-29 08:17:15 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋