True love is very long but also very sweet,When two souls meant for each other finally get to meet.
A burst of a heart,flames full of fire,Lightning steaks across the sky,an electricity wire.
An early forth of july,with fire works that don't end.
True love are not just lovers,but also very good friends.
Here is my short love poem
What do you think.
2006-08-28 17:56:44 · 9 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I love it! It reminds me of my own love life...
2006-08-28 17:58:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very sweet,
but the "STEAKS" across the sky, i wondered if they were medium rare, or well done.. lol
it kinda took the poem on a bumpy road,
Seriously, it is beautiful thoughts, and i love beautiful thoughts, and it is very brave of you to share your inner most, ideas, or thoughts, or feelings with us,
i think in time,,
you will be great,, just proofread before you post
good writing to you
ps i am always making typing errors, my fingers go to fast and sometimes i notice and correct them, and sometimes, i don't ,, so it is the thought that counts, and you have good thoughts
2006-08-28 18:04:47 · answer #2 · answered by Maureen K 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-01 00:58:37 · answer #3 · answered by raffone 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow thats a really good poem. you should send it to halmark and try to get it made into a greeting card or something. its amaizing
2006-08-28 18:00:19 · answer #4 · answered by delzzers 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If I wasn't such an asshole I would say that is very nice.
2006-08-28 17:58:50 · answer #5 · answered by mrkitties420 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i don't understand the question
2006-08-28 17:58:20 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
don't understand the question
2006-08-28 17:58:57 · answer #7 · answered by jaimestar64cross 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Goodd stuff....cute and true!
2006-08-28 17:59:55 · answer #8 · answered by O Jam 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very beautiful...
2006-08-28 18:01:48 · answer #9 · answered by i_luv_the_irish23 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋