its what i feel at the moment...see, my friend and i "hooked up" for a day..and now im not sure where things stand. this feeling is so stressful...i hate it. so instead i write. any advice? a hurricane is coming so im going to call him tomorrow. we'll see by the tone of his voice =(
resenting the truth
avoiding any confrontation
daring myself not to care
for I, thought I could be stronger
Able and willing to hold it all in
Like a mother holds her newborn in her womb
Lessons learned but yet
i still find myself at the bottomless pit
grasping the wall, staring up.
feeling the darkness within me emerge.
i stand. i wait.
in my mind, i plan my escape.
when will my doubts fade?
and when will i gain more faith?
til then, it lingers.
this darkness. it consumes my being. no thanks to YOU.
2006-08-28 16:17:35 · 16 answers · asked by azndiva 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
its actually an honest poem i like it you should compile your poems and read them afterwards when you are older it helps in understanding of who you really were before and how your emotions and life shifted
go on creating poems i too feel some of the things you wrote i would like to add this poem to my collection
2006-08-28 16:21:29 · answer #1 · answered by haringmarumo 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's ok. But don't send it no matter how much you want to. I write this type of poetry every now and then and get so pleased with it that I want everyone I know to see it. Then I wise up and realize that people don't usually respond the way you hope they would and then they question your emotional stability and soon you have everyone tip-toeing around you.
BTW, the last stanza makes me wonder if you are putting too much blame on your friend----no one's perfect, especially when it comes to relationships. You need to accept, respect and forgive cause life on earth is about luvin on people the best that you can.
2006-08-28 16:28:46 · answer #2 · answered by Miss Sierra Sun 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
as a fellow poet and someone who has had this problem i would say trust what you know about the person. are they someone who would have a little fling and leave someone or are they a commited person? trust your heart and it will lead you down the correct path.
P.S. nice poem =p
2006-08-28 16:22:12 · answer #3 · answered by marshall s 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is such a beautiful poem im so sorry for u i mean it but in the other side u have such a great talent
2006-08-28 16:25:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
That was really nice. It was really expressive and I can completely understand how you were feeling when you wrote it.
2006-08-28 16:28:36 · answer #5 · answered by Still a Sexy Momma 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats a beatiful poem and i can really relate 2 it
2006-08-28 16:23:02 · answer #6 · answered by lilmommiNeosha 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really good. anything you write will be good because its coming from your mind &soul and thats art.
2006-08-28 16:22:38 · answer #7 · answered by lilprinx3 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad except for the last line.
2006-08-28 16:27:43 · answer #8 · answered by wildstar_2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really good... very expressive... good job=D
2006-08-28 16:25:29 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hope no one steals it now.
2006-08-28 16:22:43 · answer #10 · answered by mailmetlc 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋