Who listened all those times, when you were feeling low?
Who sat beside you in rough times and helped you where to go?
Who cried when you cried, and helped away the tears?
Who tried to stay next to you, and help you with your fears?
Did you forget, That I gave you my heart?
After you left, My whole world came apart.
Did you forget, all those nights we had?
And all those times you said you loved me, now it makes me sad.
Did you forget, when you called I was there?
I always helped, when you were in despare.
Well I remember all those times I made sure you were ok.
Cause if I get to see you smile once, it will be a better day.
You are now gone, but the memories still last.
It is hard to put the ones away with love, thats in the past.
But you can still call, I will still be there.
It will still be like before, I will always care.
And remember it wise, or you will regret.
Because I will always be there for you, or did you forget?
what do u think of this poem
2006-08-27 00:05:30 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
that melts one heart
2006-08-27 00:08:23 · answer #1 · answered by Prakash 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem sweet girl.
How 'bout dis poems
Sea of Love
Journeys of the heart
where soul mates meet
becoming one with thought
a swim so sweet
. . . everlasting Love
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It's here
The space where you should be
Bend your ear
Let my kisses whisper in
Do not fear
My arms make a strong O
As all through the centuries
Lovers have been cradled.
Listen, soft!
Ten thousand-volt desire
Sears my heart
Don't give me e-mail, voice mail
Or any other means of separation
Be here and touch me
My need for you is nothing virtual
But real
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Circle
Make me a space
Weave it loose and free
Weave it with desire
Invite me in
Place your heart here in my lap
Touch me with the sureness of your need
Rise up through me like sap
To every fingertip
Until your body knows mine as your own
Trap no metal circles on my hands
Just ring me as the clarion-calling bell
Your shining eyes tell all, tell all
There's no further hallmarked proof of love I need.
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Snow
I dreamed of snow in August
Its quiet embrace
Holding us white and unconnected to the world
A floating dream of kisses and snowflakes
Icy hexagons are stacked up on my sill
No footstep in the drifts
The harsh metallic ring resounds
Of spade on frozen ground
Bow your head
Here comes a hearse
And on it lies my heart, still warm
2006-08-27 08:10:06 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cause if I get to see you smile once, it will be a better day. soooooooooooo sweet i like it so much
2006-08-27 07:35:45 · answer #3 · answered by cherryshape 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh my heart is alive!
Thank u !
If really then very nice!
2006-08-27 07:09:25 · answer #4 · answered by woo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great job : )! really touches the heart and understand completely : )!
2006-08-27 07:29:06 · answer #5 · answered by Coco 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet girl...sweet poem...nicely done.
2006-08-27 07:10:09 · answer #6 · answered by Gez 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really it touched my heart ..
thx for sharing ..
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2006-08-27 07:13:27 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem, i never seen this type o0f poem.
2006-08-27 12:45:59 · answer #8 · answered by bharathkamatam 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too sappy for me.
2006-08-27 07:17:29 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice
2006-08-27 07:22:18 · answer #10 · answered by acid tongue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋