Do you like these songs i wrote for the future? Please critique and be honest?

Question

Wildin

Check it, Everyone’s skeptical, saying that my mind’s in the wrong place
Now that I proved them wrong, now they all smiling in my face

I know they are all just swayed by my new clothes jewels and cake
Never could stand people like that, they always will be so fake

And the haterz their worse, always trying to step to me
For all you know, I could be somebody real crazy

All y’all need to realize I’m better than the average
Yeah, #1 on the charts, (yeah, I manage)

All the sudden these chicks wanna jump in the range
Well, how bout no? It’s time for some big change

If im spending my hard earned cash on you, then I call the shots
You don’t like it, go get some change scrubbing pans and pots

Cuz now that I control my own survival
Now all the money keeps on pilin’
All the time you can catch me
In some party wildin’ x2

Listen, now that ive got your attention
Im declaring my domination

I know im cocky and demand respect….
But when you come from nothing big what’d you expect

Ima take this music biz and turn it around like a saved sinner
Sorry, but for the award for best of the best im the winner

Everyone getting down to Fergie’s London bridge (oh snap)
Tryin to slow me down like I give a crap

Don’t even need weed, my money makes me high
Can’t ruin my good time, so don’t even try

So, just shake what god gave ya and call it a day
And don’t beef, just listen to Cask say:

Cuz now that I control my own survival
Now all the money keeps on pilin’
All the time you can catch me
In some party wildin’ x2

Answer 1

too cocky.
dont like it

Answer 2

I'm not a fan of rap, but I think it is really good for a rap song.

Answer 3

Dint it all rhyming

Answer 4

I like it....can feel the pulse

Answer 5

see my previous answers