heres a peom i wrote :If KISSES were rain ID send u Showers
IF hugs were minutes ID send u SHOWERS if smiles were Waves id send u the SEA and if love was a person id send u ME!
2006-08-26 08:43:55 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Pretty powerful. I thought it was catchy. It flowed well.
2006-08-26 08:46:08 · answer #1 · answered by cannonball 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Cute
2006-08-26 15:46:18 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Keep writing and be sure to save all your poetry (date them etc.) Before you know it you'll have a collection - perhaps you can publish the group of them in a book or pass them on to your family.
2006-08-26 15:47:03 · answer #3 · answered by 'Barn 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful, post it on poetry.com. I think you could go a long way in poetry. So don't stop.
2006-08-26 17:38:40 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
stick out your tongue - it won't hurt but ony take a moment.
open your shirt - I'll wait a minute
lift up your skirt - i'll be late to work
drop to your knees - forget work, i want to be with you all day
2006-08-26 15:47:51 · answer #5 · answered by cvy2000 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
replace the second showers with hours. its very very cute! i love it tho!
2006-08-26 15:48:39 · answer #6 · answered by ♥ HeartStolen ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cutesy. and i'm assuming you meant hours in reference to hugs.
2006-08-26 15:47:21 · answer #7 · answered by annie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice.
2006-08-27 17:43:29 · answer #8 · answered by jfmm 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok i see you love me soo much. i love you too. now let's not share too much love here aight?
2006-08-26 15:51:46 · answer #9 · answered by tyana 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2006-08-26 15:47:18 · answer #10 · answered by arman982 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋