Hey there
Do you even notice that it’s all wrong?
That we’re all wrong?
That I am just a girl you bring along.
But I know you are searching for something more.
And I can’t stand in your way
Anymore.
I don’t know where things fell apart
But they did
And we grew apart.
So here I say
Goodbye.
It’s time,
It’s time,
Goodbye.
Just don’t stick around and ask me why
Just move on
Leave me now
When you see me in a crowd, just pass me by.
Because I know deep down that
We’re not right.
It’s not right.
So take this song
And move along.
And as I cry
It’s okay.
I’m okay.
It’s time,
It’s time,
…goodbye.
2006-08-26 08:12:41 · 19 answers · asked by lifeistough_period 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I like it
2006-08-26 08:16:35 · answer #1 · answered by Wiseguy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your sons is gr8, I have modified it a bit, With your permission of course.
Hey there
Do you even notice that it’s all wrong?
That we’re all wrong?
That I am just a girl you bring along.
But I know you are searching for something more.
And I can’t stand in your way
Anymore.
I don’t know where things fell apart
But they did
And we grew apart.
So here I say
Goodbye.
It’s time,
It’s time,
Goodbye.
Just don’t stick around and ask me why
Just move on
Leave me now
When you see me in a crowd, just pass me by.
Because I know deep down that
We’re not right.
It’s not right.
So take this song
And move along.
And as I cry
It’s okay.
I’m okay.
It’s time,
It’s time,
Ooops Sorry tried changing a few words n lines, but the orignal is sooo good I simply cant. Keep it up sweetheart. you are good.....n I dont feel like saying…goodbye.
2006-08-26 15:31:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
here's the one i wrote
My life is brilliant.
My love is pure.
I saw an angel.
Of that I'm sure.
She smiled at me on the subway.
She was with another man.
But I won't lose no sleep on that,
'Cause I've got a plan.
You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause I'll never be with you.
Yes, she caught my eye,
As we walked on by.
She could see from my face that I was,
Flying high,
And I don't think that I'll see her again,
But we shared a moment that will last 'til the end.
You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
I saw your face in a crowded place,
And I don't know what to do,
'Cause I'll never be with you.
You're beautiful. You're beautiful.
You're beautiful, it's true.
There must be an angel with a smile on her face,
When she thought up that I should be with you.
But it's time to face the truth,
I will never be with you.
yeah right...James blunt copied it from me
2006-08-26 15:17:43 · answer #3 · answered by Prakash 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow very good! Nice lyrics to a very emotional song. Now get some music to go to it and get it copywrited!
2006-08-26 15:17:18 · answer #4 · answered by toughguy2 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I need 2 hear it with a beat but it's cool
2006-08-26 15:23:06 · answer #5 · answered by nina buena 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good but sounds similiar to other lyrics I have heard. Set it to music and see what you come up with.
2006-08-26 15:17:00 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Look pretty good. Put some music to us and send it back
2006-08-26 15:15:50 · answer #7 · answered by adkfoaiefnafedw 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
DON'T put yuor material on here. Anyone can steal it and coyright it even though you came up with it yourself. Be careful!!!!!
2006-08-26 15:27:24 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have done a great job on you song!!
I can tell it was from your heart.
It hits home with me too..
Great Job!!!!
May I copy and paste it to my blog on myspace??
2006-08-26 15:19:13 · answer #9 · answered by Butterflycry 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very very nice! i wish i was that good at writing songs i just stick to playing my guitar though
2006-08-26 15:19:08 · answer #10 · answered by skaterguy8675 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋