Correct my English writing?

Question

What is wrong with my writing?

This is what islam calls "liberation of women"
Ashraf Kalhori, a 37-year-old mother of four, has been sentenced to death (by stoning) for having had an extramarital relationship.

Also, Ms. Ghorbany is sentenced to death for the same reason in Iran.

Save them via signing the petition before it is too late:
http://www.petitiononline.com/Malak/petition.html
http://www.petitiononline.com/AshrafK/petition.html

You may read it here too:http://gura-gura.blogspot.com/2006/08/this-is-what-islam-calls-liberation-of.html

Answer 1

There is absolutely nothing wrong with your English. What is wrong with the justice system in the countries you have mentioned?

Why are the women being stoned to death for adultery? What about the men they committed adultery with? Are they also being stoned to death? If not, why not?

Back to your question about stating this in English; it is stated correctly as is, however, this is how I would arrange the words:

This is what islam calls "liberation of women:"

Ashraf Kalhori, a 37-year-old mother of four, has been sentenced to death (by stoning) for having had an extramarital relationship (or 'affair').


Ms. Ghorbany is also under a sentence of death for the same offense in Iran.

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Dear God, how I wish something could be done for these poor women!

H

Answer 2

There is nothing wrong with your writing. Its informative and educational. Thanks for the information.