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Was there really a bird,or a plane,or could he really run faster than A speeding bullet.
Could he really leap tall buldings in a single bound,or really stronger than a locomotive.
I do not believe that was really superman,I believe I know the real superman.
Hes a boy that became a man a long time ago,life made this strong man.
He may not run or leap that you can see,But the eye of the beholder is not what it seems.
I ran with this superman last night,And I can honestly tell you it was not just a dream.
This superman is faster than the speed of light,this superman move mountains,he doesn't need to leap them.
This superman has the eyes of a movie star,the smile of love,but the heart of a warrior in and around him.
This superman has so much strength,you don't need to meet him,just talking about him makes you strong.
It doesn't take an hour,a minute,a second,I am telling the truth,it does not take long.
This superman has the respect and honor of God and his angels,Not just the

2006-08-25 22:20:18 · 14 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

people of this world.
The charisma to attract not just one,but every single girl.
So I do not believe that the other guy was really superman,why do they make such a fuss.
I know the worlds strongest man,the real superman,the superman of faith,and his name is "Gus"

2006-08-25 22:24:42 · update #1

14 answers

to be completely opposite of my responce to your OTHER post...
Ill keep it to ONE word...
...WOW...

2006-08-25 22:31:16 · answer #1 · answered by Ron K 5 · 0 0

I take my hat off to you, this is a very touching poem. This proofs that people still have beautiful feelings and that the world is not entirely filled of hatred.
And may your cousin be in peace, God will take good care of him.

2006-08-26 05:38:05 · answer #2 · answered by marian m 3 · 0 0

Really thoughtful, Good prose. My condolences on your future loss.

2006-08-26 05:31:54 · answer #3 · answered by Teacher 6 · 0 0

man, thats deep, but truthfully you just need a lil bit of help with correcting a few things here and there. but over all i give it high praise! good job!

2006-08-26 05:26:33 · answer #4 · answered by Seraphiel 4 · 0 1

That was a very warm and touching poem that you wrote for your cousin and I am sure they really appreciated it knowing that they are loved so much.

2006-08-26 05:25:55 · answer #5 · answered by T.Mack 5 · 0 0

That was amazing and touching I really liked it.

2006-08-26 05:34:19 · answer #6 · answered by haystack_gurl 2 · 0 0

Good job!

2006-08-26 05:37:15 · answer #7 · answered by ♥Sapphire 7 · 0 0

very nice

2006-08-26 05:37:49 · answer #8 · answered by Omar 1 · 0 0

very nice

2006-08-26 05:33:29 · answer #9 · answered by . 3 · 0 0

very nice

2006-08-26 05:23:50 · answer #10 · answered by sinned 7 · 0 0

He sounds Brave!!......Beautiful

2006-08-27 03:04:20 · answer #11 · answered by AAP0305 5 · 0 0

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