raindrops on rooftops
wet cold alone
splish splash sound filling my soul
smooth as silk embracing her body
delicate smooth
scent of nature enters my body
anticipation rushing through mu body
singing twirling and flying
can anyone turn those phrases to one poem by adding some words and giving a general meaning to it.. feel free to repeat lines... kthxbye..
2006-08-24 23:37:35 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Hi,
Yours is really already a beautiful poem.
I feel like I have been taking away your meaning by trying to add my own...
Listening to the raindrops
caressing the rooftops
wet cold alone
I am turning for home.
Turning I feel
The splish splash fill my soul
This is my turn to heal
If your embrace will make me whole
The embrace you give
Delicate and smooth as silk
My body eager to live
Will drink it like pure milk
Oh how the anticipation is rushing through me now,
Singing twirling and flying somehow
To where the scent of nature fills the rainy air
And I at last am home - for you are there.
2006-08-25 01:30:25 · answer #1 · answered by s 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Raindrops on rooftops...
I'm standing wet, alone and so cold...
My soul's filled by the sound of splashing water
A smooth as silk embracing her body
A delicate smooth...
The scent of nature enters my body
The anticipation rushes through my body
Singing...
Twirling...
Flying...flying...
I hope you like it! I didn't change it a lot, cos it looked like a poem already.
2006-08-26 03:41:39 · answer #2 · answered by firefly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
raindrops on rooftops..
wet cold alone..
splish splash sound filling my soul..
smooth as silk embracing her body..
delicate smooth
scent of nature enters my body
anticipation rushing through mu body..
singing twirling and flying..
ermm?...
2006-08-24 23:51:20 · answer #3 · answered by ....Baby witch.. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Raindrops fall......the rooftops call
I sit all wet and cold.....alone
My soul wanders to embrace her
The delicate scent of nature surrounds me
as anticipation runs through me like the
smooth touch of silk
Catch my heart, it's willing to fly away
How was that?
2006-08-24 23:50:12 · answer #4 · answered by Wiley 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It IS a POEM Already !! Congratulations. You're a Poet, and didn't know it. !!
2006-08-24 23:56:32 · answer #5 · answered by me 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what is happening here, any way i got 2 points.
2006-08-24 23:43:06 · answer #6 · answered by Sky lark 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Que?
2006-08-24 23:44:39 · answer #7 · answered by young108west 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it's already a poem..
thanks for 2points.
2006-08-24 23:47:49 · answer #8 · answered by hualabakanube 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋