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We advised our contractor to find another producer who would guarantee the quality in conformity with the specification. Due to the situation that has arisen we will do our best to eliminate such incidents in the future. We will carry out a training for employees with the aim of increasing the control over the procuct when it is received to the magazine (according to the specification). What is more, the employees who are responsible for preparing raisins for the production will be retrained in how to deal with the products appropriately so as to prevent them from being contaminated with foreign bodies..
Nevertheless, we want to reassure you that all our products are under close inspection, both when they are produced and when they are released for sales.

2006-08-22 10:58:49 · 7 answers · asked by AsMa 1 in Education & Reference Other - Education

if it's possible exchange ackward words into better words. thank you in advance

2006-08-22 11:00:06 · update #1

7 answers

ok

2006-08-22 11:00:31 · answer #1 · answered by lyndsey H 2 · 0 1

We advised our contractor to find another producer who would guarantee quality in conformity with the specification. Due to the situation that has arisen, we will do our best to eliminate such incidents in the future. We will carry out training for employees with the aim of increasing control over the product when it is received to the magazine (according to the specification). Moreover, the employees who are responsible for preparing raisins for the production will be retrained in how to deal with the products appropriately so as to prevent them from becoming contaminated with foreign bodies..
We want to reassure you that all our products are under close inspection, both when they are produced and when they are released for sales.

2006-08-22 11:02:37 · answer #2 · answered by Seth W 2 · 2 0

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2016-09-29 13:48:58 · answer #3 · answered by fritch 4 · 0 0

Orginal text "carry out a training"
Correct text "carry out training"
Original text "Due to the situation"
Correct text "In light of the situation"
Original text "for the production"
Correct text "for production"
Original text "released for sales"
Correct text "released for sale"
"Procuct" should be spelled "product"

Hope this helps with your letter.

2006-08-22 11:22:53 · answer #4 · answered by borogirl 7 · 0 0

'for our employees'
'control over our products'
'when it is received by the magazine'
'prepairing reasons for the production'
'bodies..' should be 'bodies.'

2006-08-25 06:53:32 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

procuct should be product

2006-08-22 11:01:57 · answer #6 · answered by maddy 3 · 0 0

ok

2006-08-22 11:04:10 · answer #7 · answered by Yeah,, 2 · 0 1

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