Rip my heart out its what you do best
then tell my you love me as if its a conquest
Kiss someone else and then run back to me
cause im stupid enough just to let it be
I turn my back when your out with her
dying inside my lifes a blur.
what i would give to be your only one
im hoping you will see my day will come.
Is this what you want
and please dont front
Do you want her or do you want me
tell me something, to set me free
Rip my heart out its what your good at
tear it apart then dont come back.
Leave me to cry
as im wanting to die
knowing you and her are having a good time
dont worry about me i will be fine..
2006-08-22 09:23:37 · 21 answers · asked by Gail 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
awesome, u shud pursue it as a profession
2006-08-22 09:30:58 · answer #1 · answered by jon 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I do apologize sweetheart, but is sounds like you have way to much energy focused on Him and not enough on yourself. Take care of you and every thing will work itself out. Always remember that you are the most important person in your world.
2006-08-22 16:37:35 · answer #2 · answered by Kimmie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Knowing you and her are having a good time, dont worry about me i will be fine.
But before i leave i'll take one last look, when you look into my eyes you know i'm hooked.
Keep writing.
2006-08-22 17:52:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is really nice and i think you should keep on writing i hope this wasn't for personal experience 'cause i know how it feels.
2006-08-22 16:33:17 · answer #4 · answered by chabelita 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not bad, but it's not very original or creative. The imagery is really cliche.
2006-08-22 16:33:41 · answer #5 · answered by Samantha 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the poem, but get rid of the guy, he's bad news and you deserve better!!
2006-08-22 16:31:49 · answer #6 · answered by Jenni 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really powerful it really gets your point across. Good Luck
2006-08-22 18:45:42 · answer #7 · answered by nashiranickel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you should change the one line to please dont fret other then that its pretty great keep up the good work
2006-08-22 22:47:15 · answer #8 · answered by sassyasgal 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great Poem..... Dump him he sounds like a real jerk.... I'm sure you deserve better.
2006-08-22 16:47:43 · answer #9 · answered by johnallga32 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep your day job
2006-08-22 16:32:26 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋