u may call me crazy
u can call me insane
for every time my heart beats
it beats your name
i hear it loudly
i can hear it plain and clear
and i know its true
thats its you who i hold dear!!!
so wot do u think about this one? its only short soz.
2006-08-21 23:40:04 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I may be short and ugly
my face looks like a horse
and how does your heart beat my name?
is it beating out in Morse?
we may have never met before
we might live far away
but the little rhyme you wrote just now
has really made my day!
2006-08-21 23:47:27 · answer #1 · answered by nev 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The meter gets a little outta wack in the second verse but overall a nice sunny poem, very succinct
2006-08-22 06:46:49 · answer #2 · answered by dude 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fleas
Adam had'em.
not mine
2006-08-22 06:44:41 · answer #3 · answered by James S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
really? your heart beats JAN? cool!!
lovin your work!
2006-08-22 06:45:27 · answer #4 · answered by Jan 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep on going!!!
It's KOOL!!!~~
2006-08-22 06:44:37 · answer #5 · answered by Kay. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good
2006-08-22 12:38:20 · answer #6 · answered by tours 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋