I like it! I just spat my drink out!
2006-08-21 04:59:02
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answer #1
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answered by Anonymous
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it is an 8 in my eyes yet must be a ten the consistent use of "I" is distracting even interior the 1st line "I Fallen"?? i think of the final 2 lines desires greater artwork, although, it is an extremely emotive piece of poetry, which i hit upon extremely actual and shifting. I see your poem like this:- Fallen can not arise dangling a protracted rope, a unmarried hand attempting no longer straightforward, to hold on. From the drop something’s died close my eyes to Peace combating adjustments i will do no longer something approximately issues gets greater helpful however the words won't pop out slipping off the rope a dismal hollow emotions of dull And so on my own The solar beckons, yet can i heed the call?
2016-12-14 09:15:51
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answer #2
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answered by mays 4
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Sounds like a good strategy. :))
Thanks.
Just make sure you don't make them obese, then you will need to make a lot of sandwiches when they spend less and less time in the second situation...
2006-08-21 05:00:19
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answer #3
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answered by AlphaOne_ 5
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ahhh.... i can relax now that i dont have to figure out the male of the species. Thankyou Steve W!
2006-08-21 05:14:18
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answered by laura2910 2
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Dja mean get another girl and him into bed and make him lie in the middle?
:oD
2006-08-21 05:00:57
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answered by tmuk55 3
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Sexist nonsense.
2006-08-21 06:11:23
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answered by Dramafreak 3
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ha!ha! cheered the afternoon up a bit. Cheers mate!
2006-08-21 05:00:33
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answered by Irishbird3 3
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LOL, y'see us guys are simple creatures.....
It reminds me of the ideal mans keyboard, it has only 2 buttons. Music and Porn....
2006-08-21 04:59:45
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answered by 70sBabyBoy 2
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ha i have a hard on and a sandwich
2006-08-21 05:00:28
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answered by bigbbraz 2
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lol. i like it. makes figuring out the male species so much easier
2006-08-21 04:57:08
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answered by tjstarbe 4
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