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I like it! I just spat my drink out!

2006-08-21 04:59:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

it is an 8 in my eyes yet must be a ten the consistent use of "I" is distracting even interior the 1st line "I Fallen"?? i think of the final 2 lines desires greater artwork, although, it is an extremely emotive piece of poetry, which i hit upon extremely actual and shifting. I see your poem like this:- Fallen can not arise dangling a protracted rope, a unmarried hand attempting no longer straightforward, to hold on. From the drop something’s died close my eyes to Peace combating adjustments i will do no longer something approximately issues gets greater helpful however the words won't pop out slipping off the rope a dismal hollow emotions of dull And so on my own The solar beckons, yet can i heed the call?

2016-12-14 09:15:51 · answer #2 · answered by mays 4 · 0 0

Sounds like a good strategy. :))
Thanks.

Just make sure you don't make them obese, then you will need to make a lot of sandwiches when they spend less and less time in the second situation...

2006-08-21 05:00:19 · answer #3 · answered by AlphaOne_ 5 · 0 0

ahhh.... i can relax now that i dont have to figure out the male of the species. Thankyou Steve W!

2006-08-21 05:14:18 · answer #4 · answered by laura2910 2 · 0 0

Dja mean get another girl and him into bed and make him lie in the middle?

:oD

2006-08-21 05:00:57 · answer #5 · answered by tmuk55 3 · 0 0

Sexist nonsense.

2006-08-21 06:11:23 · answer #6 · answered by Dramafreak 3 · 1 1

ha!ha! cheered the afternoon up a bit. Cheers mate!

2006-08-21 05:00:33 · answer #7 · answered by Irishbird3 3 · 0 0

LOL, y'see us guys are simple creatures.....

It reminds me of the ideal mans keyboard, it has only 2 buttons. Music and Porn....

2006-08-21 04:59:45 · answer #8 · answered by 70sBabyBoy 2 · 0 0

ha i have a hard on and a sandwich

2006-08-21 05:00:28 · answer #9 · answered by bigbbraz 2 · 0 0

lol. i like it. makes figuring out the male species so much easier

2006-08-21 04:57:08 · answer #10 · answered by tjstarbe 4 · 0 0

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