A knock at the door
pulls her out of her trance
A man stands at the door
Her second chance
Softly she closes the door behind her
And walks with the man on by
She never looked back once
But she did start to cry
2006-08-21 02:34:23 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
she remembered how it used to be
when they were young and so carefree
she thinks about him now and then
but know's she can't go back again
for love has hurt and love has lost
she paid the price
her heart it cost
2006-08-21 02:45:55 · answer #1 · answered by Jan 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very, very good! It held my attention all the way through and the ending wasn't weak.
Please continue with your writing. You have talent.
2006-08-21 09:41:38 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
lovely you two will make a lovely partnership
2006-08-21 09:40:59 · answer #3 · answered by sassybiva 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
for soon they will fly
up into the sky.
2006-08-21 09:44:54 · answer #4 · answered by Goodspeed 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
:) Good for her!
2006-08-21 09:40:41 · answer #5 · answered by purple rain 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋