She couldnt take it any more
this pain of not knowing
he said he loved her
but the love wasnt showing
Empty nights filled with loneliness
Out with his mates
Each and every night
she sits home and waits
She dozes off
but The swinging of the front gate
jolts her awake
she sits up ready to face her fate
She smells the perfume
As soon as he enters the door
He turns to her and smiles
Another girl another whore
She cant deal with this anymore
the cheating and the lies
the nights out and the other girls
the waiting and the whys
It seems that she cries her self to sleep
more often then not
it seems that the pain
Is all she has got
They fight they struggle
she cries in vain
he was hurting her
this a new kind off pain
Black eye, bruised lip
dignity in shatters
she needs to get away
leaving is all that matters
He's out at work
she packs her case
she looks around
her heart does pace
2 be continued. read the ending in another question thanks!!
2006-08-21 02:33:46 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Sounds like the life I used to live.... amkes me sad to remember those days. If that is about you.... you CAN do better I promise you.....
2006-08-21 02:39:56 · answer #1 · answered by purple rain 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This sounds just like a Garth Brookes tune "The Thunder Rolls" words are changed a little but plot the same.Bet i can guess the ending.She shoots him, cause she cant take it anymore???Good luck God bless:O)
2006-08-21 09:47:34 · answer #2 · answered by melissa_froggies 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was Fabulous.did u actually write that?i know someone who went thru just that.i was begining to feel u were there.wow!i think u should lecture on how u write poems
2006-08-21 09:41:35 · answer #3 · answered by angel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about....
He finally learned his lesson
when she pulled out the Smith and Wesson.
2006-08-21 09:39:52 · answer #4 · answered by Velociraptor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the riddim of your words but my advise to you: try to say more with less. Here's one of mine:
I have no fear of death
indeed, she would be
a welcome guest
in my house - of poverty
it's life that makes me tremble
shame on me,
master
of an empty temple
2006-08-21 09:45:50 · answer #5 · answered by dj iOnic 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
GET OUT OF THIS RELATIONSHIP NOW
Really nice poem though, hope it wasn't true about the black eye, geez, if it is..............run, don't walk, don't even bother packing
2006-08-21 09:40:13 · answer #6 · answered by aggie babe 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
touching poem. i am blank after reading it. too good. and i m happy that she is leaving him.
2006-08-21 09:43:51 · answer #7 · answered by scarlet 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
so far so good
2006-08-21 09:40:56 · answer #8 · answered by drpepper 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋