is it full of heart orwhat?
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Where Love is forbidden hearts will harden as like rock.
Love will Feel as if it was better to not know of it.
Words shall mute themself as if a tongue was cut off and speaking became impossible.
False things shall be said as if gossip or slander.
Words will be falsely extorted.
They will concern that you mean the opposite of what you say, if you know those bad things they say of you are false, you do not need to act on it for only you know your reason and that reason is love in which if you have love in your heart, your heart will bear many fruits.
2006-08-20 14:48:05 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
you know what **** u ppl, I didnt ask your oppion Or how good it was or what details wtf I asked
2006-08-20 15:02:23 · update #1
Keats it is not.
2006-08-20 14:56:16 · answer #1 · answered by NHBaritone 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The last lines starting with 'They will concern...' is sort of wordy. In addition, the poem has too many detailed phrases, yet it is still very ambiguous to me. What is this poem about? Keep revising and don't start with 'where' because it sounds like a continuation from another verse.
2006-08-20 14:58:47 · answer #2 · answered by Venus 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am too bored to fully read it. Frankly, unless people cry when they read it, its not worth your time to write anymore. I didn't cry.
2006-08-20 14:59:34 · answer #3 · answered by reverenceofme 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job.
2006-08-20 14:55:07 · answer #4 · answered by keepsondancing 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋