Religious people does this sound good to you?

Question

Im starting a religious blog and this is going to be the summary to it. Does it sound good, anything need to be tweaked. Would you read it based on the description?

Religion was supposed to fade away as globalization and freedom spread. Instead, it's booming around the world, often deciding who gets elected. And the divine intervention is just beginning. Join in as try to be as unbiased as possible while diverging through recent religious happenings around the world and in your own backyard.

Answer 1

Yes but there is a small typo. It should read "join in as WE try to be as unbiased..."

Answer 2

sounds good to me