Ok Lets see how many more of you think Im a stalker just from my poetry....?

Question

I cant offer you the moon or all the stars above....

But darling I extend to you my ever lasting love.

I dont own the world or even just a part....

But I can promise you the deepest devotion thats in my heart.

And any way, What would you do with all the Earth and Sky?

If there were none to hold your hand or kiss you when you cry.

What good are gold and jewels when a thunderstorm appears?

And life becomes a rising tide of many doubts and fears.

I can give you comfort in a simple sort of way....

And darling I can cherish you forever and a day.

Answer 1

It's not stalking. It sounds like you are expressing your thoughts to your loved one in a unique way.

Answer 2

First off, you are a good writer,next I don't see where this can label you as a "stalker". You should publish your poetry.

Answer 3

Not a stalker just very generic

Answer 4

It doesn't necessarily make you a stalker unless you wrote it when you were hiding in the bushes outside his window.

Answer 5

i like ur poem . its very effective
the rhyme scheme is :aa/ bb/ cc/ dd/ cc ri8
i like poetry 2 & i like listening to the music
& u r not a stalker u r a romantic girl i c

Answer 6

i dont think your a stalker i think you write good well awesome poetry

Answer 7

Yeah that's good, but men like sex rather than romance. Unless he's gay.

Answer 8

doesnt sound like your a stalker

Answer 9

Is this off of a Hallmark card?

Answer 10

not a stalker, just possessive