Hey, my name is Stevenson, and i'm from NYC. I enjoy writing stories.. I just finish writing a short story and i wanted to know if anyone wanted to read it. If so, leave your email address and i'll send it to you. Thank you, and here's a brief summary of the story
Joey: A 16 year old kid with the thought of mind of Holden Caulfield and the slick mouth of any lonely teenager searching for acceptance. After Joey’s mom hits the lottery they move to Laguna Beach, California, or as Joey would say: “the place where Satan’s children reside”. While enjoying the Laguna Beach party life, Joey needs more, so he convinces his mom to send him to Africa: “To find the meaning of life and all”. While rooming at J.Danjis: A boarding school in Africa, Joey meets some questionable people and teachers who are sure to map out the real question of why Joey is so angry at the world. Taking a page out of J.D Salinger’s: Catcher in the Rye writing style and the sleek references to pop culture. He never he
2006-08-17 04:22:23 · 10 answers · asked by Stevenson J 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
The outline definitely is interesting, i can understand Joey's need to leave the glittery falseness of the indulgent Laguna Beach elite. Going to Africa provides the contrast needed to the give the story interest and drama, hopefully there his mentors provide the nectar needed to quench his rebellious thirst.
2006-08-18 16:28:57 · answer #1 · answered by sunshine25 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I will be so glad to recieve your story on my email actually iam building a website and i will really like including your short story in it to allow every one to see it and ofcourse for you to know their opinions my website email is futureworld_egy@yahoo.com
2006-08-17 11:41:48 · answer #2 · answered by egyptian one 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would like to read it.
Your story has a good start. It sounds really interesting. Good luck.
2006-08-17 11:36:42 · answer #3 · answered by Sam 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would be happy to read this story. avalm@myway. com
So far, I can only see paragraph, and sentence errors. Sounds interesting though.
2006-08-17 11:30:06 · answer #4 · answered by avalm@sbcglobal.net 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wo you are a brialliant story writer
my email is sajidataskeen@yahoo.com
2006-08-17 11:29:11 · answer #5 · answered by Riya 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Very interesting storyline :]
2006-08-17 11:29:34 · answer #6 · answered by Sorcha 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sounds boring and plagiarized.
2006-08-17 11:28:45 · answer #7 · answered by THE RACIST 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good keep working on it...
2006-08-17 11:28:02 · answer #8 · answered by ۞ JønaŦhan ۞ 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
where's the rest?
2006-08-17 11:30:22 · answer #9 · answered by stacy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
intresting.... good luck
2006-08-17 11:29:25 · answer #10 · answered by Gunnypoo 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋