Mommy I Wish
Mommy I wish I could put this in grown up words,
so you would really understand how much you mean to me.
I know I’m just a little girl right now,
and I don’t know all the things you need.
I wish I could pick you up and hold you,
like you do when I’m hurt or feeling sad.
‘Cause I know sometimes it’s hard for you,
to punish me, when I have been bad.
I wish I could give you all the things we need,
and I wish I could go to work for you.
So you could stay home and play,
and do the things you like to do.
Mommy I love you, and I’m so proud too,
and wish that all the little kids in the world,
could have a mommy, just like you.
Mommy do you know my biggest wish of all?
for all that you do.
I wish and I pray everyday,
that I will grow up, and be just like YOU.
By: Kenny P. aka-Cobra
2006-08-15 18:17:57 · 22 answers · asked by Cobra 5 in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
Wow! Truely a beautiful poem! If this is you, you are very gifted, and talented. I loved it! Thanks for sharing!
2006-08-15 18:24:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very Sweet
2006-08-15 18:21:07 · answer #2 · answered by TODSHISHLER 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm not sure this is a question, but I really love your poem. You should enter it in Poetry.com I have a few on that site.
2006-08-15 18:22:16 · answer #3 · answered by Ali 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Poem brought tears to my eyes.I have 3 wonderful daughters.I loved it!♥
2006-08-15 18:25:10 · answer #4 · answered by bamahotT 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi Cobra!
I think this is a beautiful poem... Great job!
:)
T.
2006-08-15 18:20:46 · answer #5 · answered by Theophania 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That was Beautyful
And Deep
2006-08-15 18:25:10 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
THATS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM,YOU COULD GET LOTS OF MONEY 4 WRITING THINGS LIKE THIS
2006-08-15 18:30:08 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
how could any body top that. you have explained love perfect and believe she knows how you feel because she had you.where do you think your love is coming from?
2006-08-15 18:24:53 · answer #8 · answered by m.w.meredith@sbcglobal.net 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sniff sniff with teary eyes
U did not write that though, u know?
2006-08-15 18:24:07 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is very nice uplifting and emotional.
2006-08-15 18:22:20 · answer #10 · answered by tjanet23 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋