The day we met, A wonderful surprise.
The way we laughed, The look in our eyes.
Warm was your love and soft was my touch.
It's impossible to believe I can love this much.
The day we ended I saw you crying
I knew I loved you, and not even trying
What I want most for the rest of my life.
A friend like you, But better my wife.
I do get angry and cry when I'm sad.
Your the best friend this man ever had.
My love is undieing, In time all will see.
no other woman is so precious to me.
2006-08-15 00:30:14 · 16 answers · asked by bigblock_475_hp d 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
wow.........itz just gr8...............really touches the feelings......if u wrote this for ur girlfrnd............then dnt wait go and read out to her...................she would really love it...........and u have chances of getting a kiss for this romantic poem....................
2006-08-15 00:37:15 · answer #1 · answered by tamanna 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the way you write
is very contrite
you do your rhyme
on every other line
it gets quite boring
really, man, i'm snoring
try changing it up, poems don't have to rhyme at all sometimes, it's the rhythm of the thing. i see where you're coming from, and where this could go. try again, and if you really want to write, use spell check
2006-08-15 07:36:04 · answer #2 · answered by bakbiter 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
WOW!!!! im impressed yo the chick u wrote this for is really lucky to have a guy like u!! i like ur poetry i write to an that is really good!!
2006-08-15 07:35:51 · answer #3 · answered by blade 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is sooooo cool and romantic and i like it
its really good, go read it out to her. she'll love it
your a great poet
2006-08-15 07:54:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes. you wrote as copy as text! Better, taped!
2006-08-15 07:35:37 · answer #5 · answered by Jerdy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my gf wrote me a poem like this a couple years ago. almost the exact same words!
2006-08-15 07:39:12 · answer #6 · answered by ... 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Really nice poem......great job!!!!!I write poetry as well, i am a true romantic just like you!!!!!!
2006-08-15 07:36:43 · answer #7 · answered by Baybee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry to hear your hurting mate! keep your chin up hope things work out for you..
2006-08-15 07:37:07 · answer #8 · answered by to_goodgood 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
so why did you break up?
it should be "You're the best friend...."
Your is not the contraction of You are.
2006-08-15 07:39:03 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
love it
2006-08-15 07:56:11 · answer #10 · answered by chunkybaby 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋