I think its pretty sweet.
2006-08-14 18:54:04
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answer #1
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answered by Karmically Screwed 4
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And you call that a poem...
It doesn't make sense to me...
What have you been taking lately?
Perhaps if you write some more...
People might find its humor...
A satisfatory remark you will conquer.
2006-08-15 02:04:25
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answer #2
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answered by Mike N. D 3
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not really a poem, more of an interpreted concept. extend it and maybe change the wording a little
2006-08-15 01:54:11
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answer #3
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answered by Shadow 2
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i am not sure if i would call that a poem i would say it is someone who wants to be a poet in other words a wanna be
2006-08-15 01:56:48
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answer #4
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answered by Anonymous
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what kind of pot are you talking about?
2006-08-15 02:57:18
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answer #5
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answered by jan_kalbo 2
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o that was so good !!! if you keep it up you will make some $ ...publish it. you might get .10...keep up the good work...lol
2006-08-15 01:52:58
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answered by meemeemee40 5
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can I come over to ur house? maybe try some?
2006-08-15 12:27:26
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answered by Anonymous
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I think it is one quarter finished. but it is looking good ;)
2006-08-15 07:15:29
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answered by Anonymous
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boring nothing special
2006-08-15 01:59:42
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answered by arveen paria arasuk 6
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five more syllables, and you got a haiku
2006-08-15 01:53:16
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answered by Just Gone 5
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