you read this poem and tell me what you think.
Held up at gun point for pudding pops.
I dont believe in the moon anymore.
Zip zap rap rubble Barney Betty.
Raised by liars and cartoon rabbits.
Does the cursive Z have a lil' tail?
Jux for mashed peas and respect cookies.
I can't stay inside of the margins.
Sally sold three a day for three days.
I don't mind the way that hobos smell.
I can't think with a clock in my face.
Sharpen your number 2 pencils now.
Stab your neighbor in the hand with it.
How does that make you feel about life?
Sometimes my position feels fetal.
Sometimes i wonder when it's nap time.
He sold my crayons for crack and sex.
Can i be excused from class forever?
2006-08-14 17:29:36 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Politics & Government ➔ Other - Politics & Government
very descriptive & vivid imagery.you should read this poem at a local bookstore/cafe or spoken word event.wear sunglasses,slightly pause as you transition from each phrase & alter your voice to bi-polar tones to capture their attention.
2006-08-14 18:05:47 · answer #1 · answered by bumblebee_chola 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds to me like someone with a lot of life issues.
2006-08-14 17:36:30 · answer #2 · answered by Camping Chick 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ditto!
2006-08-14 17:35:15 · answer #3 · answered by Janet K 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like it. Most of them I hate, but this one actually makes sense to me. weird.
2006-08-14 17:37:29 · answer #4 · answered by Just Gone 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Funny? yes, Original? yes. Poem? not really. It is pretty funny though.
2006-08-14 18:04:43 · answer #5 · answered by amish-robot 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
don't shoot no one !!!!!....you'll end up with a 12 ft. .....as your cell mate for the next 20 years !!...lolol
2006-08-14 17:37:37 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't do anything for me.It's very complex and makes one thing deeply though..........
2006-08-14 17:41:30 · answer #7 · answered by silhouette 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i don't think much of it. sound like random rambling don't quit your day job.
2006-08-14 17:32:47 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
its okay i guess you were board
2006-08-14 17:34:05 · answer #9 · answered by liz_805 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ode to crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-08-14 17:36:34 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋