Would you buy a card containing the following poem?

Question

Makebelieve Ballroom

and when all that remains of
our dimestore dances are scuffs
on aching linoleum,
I shall consider you carefully,
and know that we were gods once.

this was how the Rockefellers
played it, all hot and close
enough to the bones;
we blew eight to the bar,
eight to the bar,
on blistered rugs and buckling
storeroom floors.

and you were all fierce reds
and polished whites,
clapping and surging with
the pulses of Dorsey,
whirling and crackling with
the promises of Miller,
turning and wailing with
the heat of the vacuums.

Today, I played the Dorsey
once more,
and as the needle danced
back and forth
on only a paper moon
only a paper moon
only a paper moon,
I heard the creaking
of the storeroom
boards, and for one
dying moment
you and I were spooning,
alone and invincible,
in the dust of our
makebelieve ballroom.

Answer 1

Good Poem but a little lengthy, I like poems to get straight to the point. Just mt opinion.

Answer 2

Nope.I Really Think That Is A Stupied As He ll Poem.It Makes No Since.

Answer 3

im hopeing you wrote that, because thats a horrible poem if Hallmark published that.
no i wouldnt. i would buy it for an enemy because i know by the time they get done reading the poem, they would have suffered as much as i had when i read it.

Answer 4

Nope.

Answer 5

only if i had a big truck to get a card that size home! Ha ha.

Answer 6

thats sweet. Yes I would.

Answer 7

NO...too complicated!!

Answer 8

nah

Answer 9

No way.

Answer 10

no too long