***who is this girl that has kept my mind and heart in complete wonder? i scarcely know a thing about her, yet i'm stumbling upon reason after reason to find her out. oh, her laughter, that composes a gorgeous smile that expands softly across her face, rings out like that of an angel's song. how i wish she'd discern my adoration for her eyes that are gentler than the summer morning breeze surfing across the sands of a calm desert shore. the image of her standing there with her hair behind her and the colors of the sunset decorating her glowing skin is one of which i would hope to not imagine some day but rather set my eyes on. so, who is this girl that is even still keeping my mind and always my heart in complete attentitive wonder?****
2006-08-14 16:39:39 · 29 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
you had me at " *** "
* tear *
2006-08-14 16:45:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes and no...It's lovely and descriptive on one hand...but goes over board a bit in the description ( from the part that starts: summer breeze,across the sands... was too much) I really liked everything up to that point.Very sweet and very romantic. Keep it simple. No need to embellish it too much. Also, is this a girl you know? If so don't become a silent stalker, say hello! You obviously have a creative and romantic mind...go for it.
2006-08-14 16:47:17 · answer #2 · answered by ShellRe' 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Maid Sama Kamisama Kiss particular A Kamichama Karin Peach lady Amnesia InuXBoku SS Hiiro No Kakera Snow White With The pink Hair save Me Lollipop The Wallflower MANGA- Black chicken one hundred% acceptable lady
2016-11-25 01:40:54 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Leave out that part about the eyes being gentler than the summer breeze surfing the sand, and you have a winner.
2006-08-14 16:45:18 · answer #4 · answered by busybody12 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
She's someone who is every bit as human as you and if you are ok with that, you had better get your butt in gear and find her cause she'll be taken soon.
2006-08-14 16:46:51 · answer #5 · answered by old me... past sucks 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice - but a little too wordy in the second half.
2006-08-14 16:50:25 · answer #6 · answered by monkeymom 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I stopped reading after the second word. Srry.
2006-08-14 16:43:51 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
ahh i wish i could find a guy to say stuff like that about me. A-plus buddy, she'll love it.
2006-08-14 21:30:59 · answer #8 · answered by Amelia M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's so refreshing to find a man who is not afraid to show his deepest feelings. That is so sexy.
2006-08-14 19:50:04 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes very!
2006-08-14 16:43:23 · answer #10 · answered by ▒Яenée▒ 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
awww yeah that is.dont listen to the jerks that said eww they probably wish somone would say that to them too.
2006-08-14 16:45:21 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋