I can't figure out an ending for this piece so any suggestion whould be helpful.
* TSK TSK*
How many times do I have to tell you
It was just one night, not for ever
Only a moment of hot steam pleasure
Ignited by the clubs rythms
a bit too much wine
The rythm of your hips, catalyst
smoldering eyes
the ache and shiver along my spine
Through arching, bending, breaking quivering
fevered-pulse
Never did I slip
mention your name
whisper sweet nothings
No not I
but pull , claw, hastily strip
hard and hungry
animal urge led
desire all chemical
lust
Feel free to tear it apart if you wish.
2006-08-14 15:44:24 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Games & Recreation ➔ Hobbies & Crafts
should be hot "steamy" pleasure. And- Rhythms is spelled like this. Why don't you try:
you have to know it was what it was
heart and body now struggle
there is ache for your touch and again I may fall
but never did I intend such
TSK TSK
2006-08-15 08:19:16 · answer #1 · answered by pinkadink40 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Gee, I can't do it justice - it has to speak in your voice.
But here's a try - just ideas, really. It's not very good I know:
But a moment's release satisfied all my desire for you
And now your body is just another weight for me to bear
I dunno - Actually, I'd like to hear how YOU felt! You have an interesting way of capturing the passion, so just try to put the feelings afterward into words.
Post it when you're done!
2006-08-15 08:09:28 · answer #2 · answered by American citizen and taxpayer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you had some good sex.
2006-08-14 15:48:01 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
to bad you were just all in my mind
2006-08-14 16:56:22 · answer #4 · answered by rradboys 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋