poetry good or bad?

Question

hey i would really really apreciate it if anyone could read my poems and give me some feed back on here. i've been writing for a few years. heres the link
http://www.itsonlywords.com/search.cfm?composer=2131

Answer 1

i would say strengthen up your opening lines and maybe be a little (just a little) bit more abstract. now keep in mind this is what you would want to do to make someone like ME like them. i am a poetry elitist and i am also light years beyond the material that most of these people will be basing their "feedback" on. most people will probably like them the way they are. some might say the poems sound too "emo" but **** all that ****. you have great material that will already be widely appreciated by simple minded young girls or excessively sentimental adults with the minds of children. this is the reason that i say make it more abstract and powerful because in my opinion it is better to be appreciated by a few great minds than to be appreciated by thousands of simple minds,unless you are trying to make money off of it in which case you would be comprimising the artistry aspect of the work anyway. to answer your question this work is good before it's bad and actually it is great but it can only get better. don't let anyone tell you anything outside of the fact that you have skills.

Answer 2

Some parts, I like. Other parts, I don't. It really just comes down to, how old are you?

Answer 3

good

Answer 4

you tell me

Answer 5

uh, it doesnt even rhyme..