Like my brief poem?

Question

I wrote this short poem about one year ago, on a day when I was feeling particularly inspired and defiant about my future. Do you think it gives a glimpse into ambition, or does it wierd you out?


I stand alone before the adoring thousands,
My figure transfixed with the glory of the knowledge of the way.
Cheering, chanting they call out my name,
A stentorian roar to collapse the foundations of the obsolete,
And rebuild them together, in righteousness anew.
“Lead us from our slumber, show us the path!”
A new age is dawned, for we have grown once again.
“Together!” I lead the lonely cry-
“And rise as one!” the many reply.
Someday, they’ll all cheer.

Answer 1

Sounds like your tired of the way things are going in this world, your confident and itchin to do something, thankfully you wrote this here, in most countries, you'd be shot for that poem.

Answer 2

I think it is an interesting poem. i have a couple of interpretations of it but i'll just leave them to myself.

Answer 3

That grow to be very deep words:) Wow very...i do not recognize the thanks to describe yet once you position pictures into your writing i might want to work out ex. the river, the haunting colorings. you've a wise set of words that you've chosen. i love it:)

Answer 4

cool... it sounds like a rock song

Answer 5

Not really, but then I never was into poetry either...

Answer 6

its iight dog u feel me

Answer 7

Hy Hitler the second.....

Answer 8

I like that!
You have talent! ;)