this is an acoustic song i wrote (its my 1st song everrr)
...and they said that fairie tales dont come true
i cannot belive the same since i met you
chourus .. this beatiful love...
i swear it came from above
this beatiful life
just you and me..
tonit seems just right
ihavent yet lost the fight within the fight
this love seems so real to me
sittin beneth the willow tree
chorus
im not dreamin, im not dreamin
i cant belive that this came true
im not leavin , Im Not Leavin
just me and you....
chorus
and they said that fariy tales dont come true...
THE END
if its not good tell me what to change to make it good b/c i would really love for this song to be great!!
2006-08-14 13:18:39 · 7 answers · asked by punkrockprincess 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
hey, thats nice...just i would change a little the part before the last chorus...i dont know what u or others think, but my opinion is that it doesnt make sense that u say that ur surprised with the love that came true, but u are saying that you wont leave...why would u leave if u dreamed so much for what happened?
but in my opinion, the song is really nice, keep it up and feel free to tell me what you think about my answer and also to ask for opinions about your beautiful songs!
my mail is j_navarro12345@yahoo.it
oh, and about the title, i would recommend something like "dream come true"...
2006-08-14 13:39:59 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Name it "My Fairy Tale Love"....... You really need to write more lyrics, just right from your heart to make it good and meaningful. Be sure to use the "Check Spelling" feature, as you want it to look and read well. No excuse for misspelled words or lack of punctuation. ie:belive = believe , dreamin= dreamin' , fairie = fairy , dont=don't , chourus= chorus
Sorry if I got carried away. I'm a writer and linguistics fanatic.
2006-08-14 13:51:40 · answer #2 · answered by LU 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"i have been everywhere." Hank Snow had the unique hit, and the different hit version grow to be by technique of Lynn Anderson. For the record, Johnny funds's version grow to be by no skill valuable, and the in uncomplicated words reason human beings imagine he did "the version" of it grow to be because his recording of the song grow for use in the alternative inns commercials presently after funds died.
2016-11-25 01:22:08 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the song is good. But you need LONGER verses. I think the chorus should be good.
2006-08-14 14:29:07 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats an awesome song! email me with more of your other lyrics i would love to hear them at vballhun21@yahoo.com
2006-08-14 13:25:11 · answer #5 · answered by Laurie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not dreamin
2006-08-14 13:24:54 · answer #6 · answered by Sad Mom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really like this song...
and its so true.
2006-08-14 13:25:29 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋