I am a Goddess
You dont have to tell me that i'm beautiful-->> I know that i am..
You dont need to tell me anything-->> I dont need you or anyone else to tell me, i know already...I am a Goddess, i love or kill whom i please...Be warned I am dominating, I will not let you or any other weakling walk over me...Do you know who I am? Do you dare ask? Scared of the answer you might get?? I am a fighter and a lover...If I choose, you might get to know both of those sides of me...I am an extremely sexual being, but I choose to stay inactive until i see a human worthy of me!!! I will retreat into the forest where i have become accustomed to, there I will wait and lerk..Beware for if I get upset, you will feel my rath..yes that's right..
For I am a Goddess...
2006-08-14 10:05:33 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
wow...i can feel the ground shaking when you walk in the room, you have such power.
it seems to me that you know who's boss, and that boss is you. without you, the world would spin off it's axis and tumble into infinity. already i am curling up into a ball in anxiety and bewilderment and awe at the mere presence of your avatar.
2006-08-14 10:14:42 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like the concept. It's got a strong and powerful message. I would work on the sound of your word choices and also maybe make allusions to other powerful goddesses from literature/Mythology. Like Athena or Artemis or Aphrodite...Artemis is the chaste goddess of the hunt, so that may work for part of it. I think the allusions and some alliteration would add even more depth and "poetry" to the good concept you have so far. (p.s. rath is actually "wrath")
2006-08-14 17:12:53 · answer #2 · answered by drusilla 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It has an air of wickedness. And I don't feel compelled to finish reading it, tho I did. Usually persons who have to declare how powerful they are, are most definitely feeling weak.
2006-08-14 17:13:15 · answer #3 · answered by GiGi 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
A Goddess would be good......not evil like you make her out to be.
2006-08-14 17:13:13 · answer #4 · answered by brewbeer212 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
good, you let out your emotions but try to stay away from degrading others, instead degrade people
2006-08-14 18:54:46 · answer #5 · answered by Nikki 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's more of a battle-cry than a poem.
2006-08-14 20:16:45 · answer #6 · answered by she who is awesome 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
will you marry me
2006-08-14 17:11:23 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋